Reviews for Invested Time
Seacook chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
A very enjoyable read...nicely done! (thought it was peanut butter on pancakes, though, 'cuz I remember thinking it was cool that he and I like pancakes the same way. Everybody knows you put applesauce on waffles - that's what all the little squares are for! ;-))
Serit chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
This is sweet! I think you have gotten Trip's befuddled thought processes absolutely right! And it's so nice that you show Malcolm's anxiety in "Laced With Metaphor"; they're thinking about each other, and they don't know it yet!