Reviews for The Willing Descent of Hermione Granger
The Other World chapter 9 . 1/4
love the intensity, and the last chapter was particularly inspired.
hope this story is not abandoned?
Person P chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
Please continue!
Leez chapter 9 . 4/7/2014
A very very good fic! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more in the future!

Leez
Elased chapter 9 . 4/4/2014
Frankly? This fic had been incredible. I love the end of chapter 8 especially, where Tom was high on the (first) kiss and compared kissing H to the Dark Arts. Call me twisted but wasn't that the ultimate Voldie romance?
Love your version of H and Tom struggle. Even under manipulation H still showed rather remarkable logic. And Tom, Tom, you never knew you changed too. Lots more subtly but you did.
Keep writing?!
M. A. G. F chapter 9 . 2/13/2014
Really, really well-written. I like it very much.

I did have some concerns... before realizing this is from 2011. Great.

It feels kinds rushed the whole isolation thing. However, it's very well-handed. It's not a typical "he's handsome, and I like him". It's way more complicated. It's very realistic, in the character aspect.

There never is a reason why Riddle ends up subconsciously liking Hermione. Other than teacher pride over student suceeding.

And that "end" is not really a conclusion. Riddle thinks that he will eventually have to kill Hermione, and that's it.

Still, very good job.
DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I love this idea, I'm a huge Tomione fan (big Tom Riddle Jr. fan too) ;)
Shamelessly Radiant chapter 9 . 6/28/2013
Hi!

So, first: I like this story a lot. I like the fact that the characters seam real, that Hermione doesn't fall in love in three seconds and becomes dark and that Tom doesn't becomes good in three seconds too.
Second: Your writing style is amazing.
Third: If I may suggest something: I feel that you should let Hermione a while without the diary. I think she isn't that obsessed with it as Ginny Weasley was. Ginny was more dependant. Hermione is intelligent and will have figured out that there is something wrong with it. Just a suggestion, it's your story off course.
And last: Keep writing! I'm enjoying it and I'm going to follow it.

Xxx
TheLightningScar chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
Ugh I love Tom's POVs. I hope you do more of them.
Poor Hermione, my heart broke hearing her insecurities and self-doubt. I feel quite sad that Tom Riddle is trying to do the very thing she fears - manipulate her into thinking he actually cares. I do hope she realizes what's going on and doesn't take his shit. A weak Hermione is just not my thing.
I'm not sure where you're going with this. Is Hermione going to become dark? Is she going to remain light? Is Tom ever going to become real? What's he gonna do if she decides to stay on the Light side? Sooo many questions. I hope you update soon so we can get some answers! xxx
TheLightningScar chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
I really am enjoying the story so far. The writing is very good and the plot is original. I'm still not sure how I feel about the whole age thing. I mean, she's thirteen and he's sixteen. While this isn't terrible (and I know there are lots of relationships like this in real life), somehow it just doesn't feel right. I mean, she's practically a child.
asdfghjkl anyway, I hope you don't plan to abandon this story? It seems you haven't updated since January. I hope you still have plans to continue, things are just now beginning to get really interesting :)
TheLightningScar chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
I really like this story so far. Not sure how I feel about a dark!Hermione but so far, I'm quite enjoying it..I am worried about one thing, though. How is this going to be a Tom/Hermione story? For one, he's simply a Horcrux. Secondly, Hermione's 12. For there to be a relationship between her and Tom, she'd need to be older, otherwise it's kind of like pedophilia.
Liveera chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
I was just reading this, normally, and then the line about self-improvement and fear showed up and I starting cracking up so hard that I almost choked on an ice cube. Good job.
Alaia96 chapter 9 . 5/23/2013
Loving this story, really love to see new creative ways for them to be together. Also the way you are keeping Tom the same and not falling crazy in love but making him being fascinated with the idea of her is brilliant. Can't wait to see her grow up and for more! :D thank you!
Keira-House M.D chapter 9 . 5/2/2013
Interesting story. Hermione/Tom has always intrigued me and it's good that you've got them both in character. Looking forward to more.
kayellis chapter 9 . 4/25/2013
This story looks very promising, and I'm interested to see where you take it from here. I haven't exactly worked out how much canon you're aiming to work into this story, but as this is Tomione, leniency is generally granted. I like how you've put together Tom's thought process with respect to Hermione, as well as how impressionable Hermione is at this stage. The dramatic irony of Hermione suggesting the diary might "corrupt her soul" is fantastic. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Thank you for posting, and keep writing! :)
juniperlei chapter 9 . 3/30/2013
I like it very interesting update soon ok :D
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