Reviews for The Willing Descent of Hermione Granger
Carath chapter 2 . 8/8
Hey, I really enjoy your story! Your direct way of telling your plot is making it absolutely cool;).
SirCxyrtyx chapter 9 . 7/19
I knew, starting this story, that it was probably dead. (But with that summary, how could I not?) Great stuff so far, and tons of potential. If it stays unfinished forever, I will not regret having read it; but, it is my fondest hope that someday, I shall receive an email informing me of a new chapter.
Owlfur chapter 9 . 7/17
Update! Update! You must update that is a command from Tom Riddle himself! This story is to good not to finish!- Owl LeStrange
Owlfur chapter 1 . 7/17
Why did you lie to your planner, Hermione Jean? Am I the only one who finds that funny? Loving the story so far. Keep it up!- Owl LeStrange
The Other World chapter 9 . 1/4
love the intensity, and the last chapter was particularly inspired.
hope this story is not abandoned?
Person P chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
Please continue!
Leez chapter 9 . 4/7/2014
A very very good fic! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more in the future!

Elased chapter 9 . 4/4/2014
Frankly? This fic had been incredible. I love the end of chapter 8 especially, where Tom was high on the (first) kiss and compared kissing H to the Dark Arts. Call me twisted but wasn't that the ultimate Voldie romance?
Love your version of H and Tom struggle. Even under manipulation H still showed rather remarkable logic. And Tom, Tom, you never knew you changed too. Lots more subtly but you did.
Keep writing?!
M. A. G. F chapter 9 . 2/13/2014
Really, really well-written. I like it very much.

I did have some concerns... before realizing this is from 2011. Great.

It feels kinds rushed the whole isolation thing. However, it's very well-handed. It's not a typical "he's handsome, and I like him". It's way more complicated. It's very realistic, in the character aspect.

There never is a reason why Riddle ends up subconsciously liking Hermione. Other than teacher pride over student suceeding.

And that "end" is not really a conclusion. Riddle thinks that he will eventually have to kill Hermione, and that's it.

Still, very good job.
DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I love this idea, I'm a huge Tomione fan (big Tom Riddle Jr. fan too) ;)
Shamelessly Radiant chapter 9 . 6/28/2013

So, first: I like this story a lot. I like the fact that the characters seam real, that Hermione doesn't fall in love in three seconds and becomes dark and that Tom doesn't becomes good in three seconds too.
Second: Your writing style is amazing.
Third: If I may suggest something: I feel that you should let Hermione a while without the diary. I think she isn't that obsessed with it as Ginny Weasley was. Ginny was more dependant. Hermione is intelligent and will have figured out that there is something wrong with it. Just a suggestion, it's your story off course.
And last: Keep writing! I'm enjoying it and I'm going to follow it.

TheLightningScar chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
Ugh I love Tom's POVs. I hope you do more of them.
Poor Hermione, my heart broke hearing her insecurities and self-doubt. I feel quite sad that Tom Riddle is trying to do the very thing she fears - manipulate her into thinking he actually cares. I do hope she realizes what's going on and doesn't take his shit. A weak Hermione is just not my thing.
I'm not sure where you're going with this. Is Hermione going to become dark? Is she going to remain light? Is Tom ever going to become real? What's he gonna do if she decides to stay on the Light side? Sooo many questions. I hope you update soon so we can get some answers! xxx
TheLightningScar chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
I really am enjoying the story so far. The writing is very good and the plot is original. I'm still not sure how I feel about the whole age thing. I mean, she's thirteen and he's sixteen. While this isn't terrible (and I know there are lots of relationships like this in real life), somehow it just doesn't feel right. I mean, she's practically a child.
asdfghjkl anyway, I hope you don't plan to abandon this story? It seems you haven't updated since January. I hope you still have plans to continue, things are just now beginning to get really interesting :)
TheLightningScar chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
I really like this story so far. Not sure how I feel about a dark!Hermione but so far, I'm quite enjoying it..I am worried about one thing, though. How is this going to be a Tom/Hermione story? For one, he's simply a Horcrux. Secondly, Hermione's 12. For there to be a relationship between her and Tom, she'd need to be older, otherwise it's kind of like pedophilia.
sshhiippeerr chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
I was just reading this, normally, and then the line about self-improvement and fear showed up and I starting cracking up so hard that I almost choked on an ice cube. Good job.
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