Reviews for Weight
omega1979 chapter 9 . 7/11/2012
i don't often get choked up reading a fan fic...this was the exception. you nailed every character and it was just brilliant
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 9 . 9/5/2011
What? It's over? *does an impersonation of Murdock's pout* Nice fic. Maybe there can be a sequel?
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 8 . 9/5/2011
God damnit, Hannibal, that was the dumbest thing I've ever seen you do. This is not gonna end well, is it? Argh, I wish I could get my hands on the bastards who did this...
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 7 . 9/5/2011
Oh God, Murdock...I'm glad it was B.A. he went too. Don't get me wrong, Face is a great friend, but I don't think he could have handled this situation very well. And Hannibal can't manage the physicality, though he is trying. But if this is the start of the dam, I hate to see what the river's gonna look like.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 6 . 9/5/2011
I can't awww enough. You're making it physically impossible to awww enough for this fic. I just worry about the shit-storm that's coming on the horizon. And what did B.A. mean he couldn't get to the people who did this? Did the team kill them, or did those #%&$&* get away?
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 5 . 9/5/2011
One, Murdock needs a slightly more less death defying hobby. Two, AWWWWW! Sorry, had to get that out. Damn, dear. You sure know how to pull at the heart strings.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 4 . 9/5/2011
I'm torn between wanting to scream in fury and just go "aww" really loudly. Poor Murdock. B.A., not the most subtle moment ever. Nice characterization with all the guys by the way. *hugs Hannibal*
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Oh God...I think...I think I'm going to be sick. Son of a...grrrr. And the fact they used kids...

Shoving that aside, great insight into the team. That bit about Murdock's less then healthy responses to an annoyed B.A. made me laugh. Which this fic definitely needed. Poor Face. Nice interaction between him and Hannibal.
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
Murdock! *sniff* Okay, where are the bastards? If the guys haven't killed them yet, I want too. *hugs Murdock and B.A.*
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Phew, big mistake, boys. Big, big mistake. You do not mess with the crazy person, especially when he has those three for friends.
kazzibee chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
Amazing story, written superbly, I just want more!
EsaEnai chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
Well done! Bravo! That was a good ending. Not too sugary sweet, like a lot of h/c ones are. Great job!
QueenOfAwesomness chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
THE END? WHY? You're gonna write like a sequel or something right? (And by the way; I LOVE that you had BA knock Murdock outta his phunk. You just gotta live the Big Guy being conforting :-))
Hoodoo chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
Holy bloody fokking hell. I suppose I could go through an on-line thesaurus and just start listing all the words for 'love' and 'adoration', but that's not going to convey the deep and poignant emotion I have for this, and you.

I'm so pleased BA was the rock for Murdock, something for him to cling to in the riptide that threatened to carry him away. And the description of BA learning to 'deal' with Murdock, by ignoring the accents and puppets and actual words and instead reading body language feels so, so true. BA is so much more than most people write him.

Love it. Just loved every second of it, even the parts that made me gag. xxxooxo

(And of course, you KNOW how I feel about a brow-beaten Hannibal. I'm a little sweaty from Face ripping into him. It's a good kind of sweat. A sweat that comes from titillation . . .!)
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
WOW just WOW...I know that is inadequate but still that's all I can really come up w/just now..Part of me is like NOOO it can't be over yet...Murdock isn't fixed yet...but then it is like a good ending...and LMAO 'Magic Negro' that was AWESOME and Face tackle/hugging Murdock...SIGH...this was a great story!

THANKS:D
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