Reviews for Two Sided Heart
Random Chick chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Continue! Update! I love your story! H/IchiHime (IchiHime mostly and normally when Hichigo isn't a major factor, but still).
InuxKagLover2011 chapter 3 . 6/9/2012
You should write a few more chapters! :D I think this was a great fic, but it could be longer. :P 3'd it though.
Volpone chapter 3 . 6/2/2012
Awesome ending to an awesome story! Thank you so much for the gift, and I'm sorry it took me so long to get around to finishing it! You're an excellent writer, and I'm always pleased your sexy, funny stories. I say, more Hichigo/Orihime! But then, you know how much I like Hichigo. I can't wait to see what you write next! Maybe a little Game of Thrones fic? Just putting the idea out there!
S0phi3F4wn chapter 3 . 3/24/2012
hahaha
Alleluia00 chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
Well writen. But if Ichigo has any self respect he will kick his Hollow's ass.
Talita Silva chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
XD .. To be continued?

Please continue
lyerlaboys1 chapter 3 . 12/24/2011
Awsome...that ending was just fab. I can picture that happening to with his hollow laughin at him when ichigo found out.
OrihimeKurosakiInoue chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
Haha Cutee &'Funniee Isshinn' Is Soo Stupidd...Stupiddly Hilarious. Anywho
OrihimeKurosakiInoue chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
Haha Cutee &'Funniee Isshinn' Is Soo Stupidd...Stupiddly Hilarious. Anywho
undead-hero chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
I fell inlove!

For some reason I can imagine this happening. I wish it would .

Well, it is written really well and it was a really interesting story. _
Aya chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
I'm going to read the unedited right now, but this edited version is pretty good! Poor Ichigo wondering how Himw knows what to do made me laugh!
nypsy chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
debated whether to review or not-hopefully you don't consider all criticism as flaming... no major criticisms-this is just a stylistic thing i'm commenting on. mind you i'm female & probably older than a lot of readers (lots of teens on site), so my comments may reflect my demographic & not be an issue for others.

i was into this up until your steamy/romantic lemon took a turn in mood. unless your character is someone crass, like grimmy or nnoitra, & they are directly speaking or thinking, using terms like pu* & fu* just kills the romance. ichi is super respectful towards women, so even in lust mode, i can't see him thinking of her body part as a p* or their first time as just f*ing. its sort of like the difference between a love scene & just regular porn. using euphemisms & drawing attention to inner feelings/thoughts set this up as 'love scene', then we went into porn land, but at very end, you get 'love scene' imagery again w/the repeated love confession & cuddling. not saying there's anything wrong w/porn-type smut for anyone into it, just mixing those two vibes can make it a bit less smooth to read.
himelove22 chapter 3 . 11/28/2011
WOW THAT WAS HOT O.O very nice chapter_
Volpone chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
Wonderful chapter, Tolkien! Made me smile. As always, well written and silly. Thank you for the gift.
VisceralMel chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Good story. You added a little bit of humor in there which is a refreshing change from all the angsty stuff I've been reading. Hope you update soon.
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