Reviews for Overheated
hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Riza wins again! XDDDD

I love this one. It's hilarious.
afinedenouement chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I can't describe how much I like this piece. Just the way Riza acts is perfect in it's own way. You have quite the talent my friend.
Aurora2361 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Oh, I like! Especially the end! Haha!
havocmangawip chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Absolutely wonderful!

I like where being overheated takes you! Clearly it causes brilliance. I just hope it doesn't kill you!

Great characterization and an entirely plausible scenario. Master Hawkeye is RIGHT to send her off for her virtue. (Too bad she's learning new tricks!)

Riza will always PWN Mustang.
mebh chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
This is really great!

Usually I feel a little frustrated with short little pieces like this (because I want MORE). But this was absolutely perfect.

Thanks for sharing!
OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Ouch xD ahahaha