Reviews for Heaven Turned Hell
Reyoki chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Having shamelessly used this oneshot as fap material, I must say that I found the aftermath of the smut quite intriguing. I would enjoy seeing it developed into a full multi-chaptered story.

Out of curiosity, have you played Dirge of Cerberus at all? The majority of the events in Dirge actually take place in the ruins if Midgar.
matchynishi chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
This is great, can't wait for more!
Angelwarrior1 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Very interesting, not to mention HOT. Will the threesome meet again? I certainly hope so. By that time I'm hoping Cloud will have learned some things about himself.

Angelwarrior1
KitaraStrife chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
This is COMPLETE! No way! This is NOT complete! I smell sequel, or at least second chapter! Come on, this was amazing, but that ending just screams I HAVE MORE TO TELL BUT I'M NOT TELLING YET.
harathor chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
This story was hot
mizperceived chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow! That's really all I can say...

The smut was fantabulous! I also love the twist at the end... very nicely done and definitely wouldn't mind if you worked this into a multichapter... )
ShadesofImagination chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Wow! Of all the things I was expecting, that twist was not it. I guess I should have guessed something of the sort when you said it was set after AC.

Either way, it was amazing and I really hope you write more.