Reviews for The New Future's Face
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
I looooove Little Haruki!
Peach chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
So Yoshi's the only oblivious one to his love...maybe she should open her mind a bit to that. Don't apologize for taking a long time to update by the way, I've read stories that have taken longer.

Xion doesn't want Haruki to be a Keybearer...after the events of the series, I don't blame her, wishing that on any kid would be like wishing death on them, of course, he'll probably get it anyways.
Knight-Dawn chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
Once again, I am reduced to "awww."

I get the feeling that Haruki's going to be a "special case." That's sad in a way, since neither of his parents want him to be like them, but in another way I'm pretty sure he'll end up being just as awesome as they are and they'll be okay with it.

I like how Xion says that it's raising kids the Keyblade wielders were scared of (potty training, lol!) That was great... And true. XD

It's sad to think a lot of them must've been lonely people... :C

I like the little scene at the end, too. That was just too cuuute. -

Good luck with writing more of this, I look forward to your next update! :)

Best,
Knight-Dawn
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
I love Haruki! And Riku is an AWESOME dad.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
Yay, a new chapter!

;-; Poor Yoshi... Blinded by her affection until it was too late. And poor Haruki, in a way. Having to see his best friend/crush go through that and being practically powerless to stop it...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
You...updated...T_T-:D(If you can't figure it out, that really cheered me up)

Yay!

Other comments...umm...Haruki so obviously loves Yoshi, and if not they really care about each other.
Peach
Knight-Dawn chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
*insert one really REALLY long squee here*

Besides the image of Riku holding baby Haruki for the first time in the first chapter, this is my favorite one so far!

The ending is just... AWWW. Riku ruffled his hair... And Haruki's so nice to Yoshi even though she was too infatuated to listen to him. (That shows how much he cares about her.) That's so SWEET.

And I can't tell you how happy it made me to see you talking about my stories in the comments. :) I'm glad you think Hikari and Haruki are cute in my stories, too...

Though it's still hard to tell, I think my Haruki's going to be a bit more of a ladies man than yours is since he's already got Yoshi... XD

Anyway, thanks for the Haruki-fix! I'm off to type up that Lea/Terra/Riku story now... Hopefully I'll finish it tonight if I'm lucky. :)

Best,
Knight-Dawn
Knight-Dawn chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
You know, I seriously can't believe I didn't fave this until now! I've read it several times over... *shakes head* Silly me.

Just so you know, I love how you portray Riku and Xion in the first chapter. It feels really real. Raising kids IS really hard, I'm sure (no actual experience yet, lol) and at a young age it'd be even harder. Especially considering their occupations. Yeah...

So it feels natural that they'd consider adoption... And also that they'd really (at heart) want to keep their baby all the same. So of course it doesn't take much to sway them in that direction, lol.

I'm really anxious to find out what happens on his sixteenth birthday, though!

Keep up the writing, and please continue this one soon!

Best

Knight-Dann
MonMonCandie chapter 4 . 9/25/2011
Fuuuu, oh my gosh. I'm so sorry I'm reviewing this so late! D: I hate school...

Anyways! Haruki is as adorable as always. ;3; And I actually shared the same sentiments as Yoshi when I thought about proms at a young age. I believed they were supposed to be magical. XD LOL I love how Haruki offered to be Yoshi's date though. That's so cute! X3 Oh, and of course he let Yoshi "win" the race...right. Haha! XP
MegaWallflower chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
Aw This is adorable! I would have read this earlier, but my life's getting in the way of a lot of things, too. . This was really cute, though. Haruki and Yoshi going to prom... I can just *picture* it... And people have already started naming couples? The crazies! *Hides all mentions of Haroshi I've made* yep, crazies... And Haruki is so nice to comfort Yoshi like that. This is such an adorable moment... Excellent work. :)
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
AWWWW! SO cute! Make it last while u can Haruki... :D
Aika08 chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
Aww, how sweet! But I sort of forgot who Yoshi is...

Anyways, great chapter!
Mirae-no-sekai chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
D'aww... such a sweet chapter. Can't wait to see how that turns out!
Cerika13 chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
Am I the first one to review for this chapter?

Oh great, Kawaiiness is back . . . :*))

Yeah! Haruki and Yoshi FTW! Can imagine both of them dancing together. _

Please continue. :DD
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Lol What's pizza...

I forget. Who's Yoshi?
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