Reviews for Paperwork
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
This is wonderful! So nice to see an author who's thinking about the human side of things, all the practical stuff that they ignore in the comics and movies. There's so much drama in the day-to-day stuff, and you did a great job of showing it. :) Nerd all you want! It gives your story a ring of authenticity.

Just out of curiosity, do you have a ballpark estimate of how much money the US government would have given Steve Rogers, if he were a real soldier in this situation? Are we talking a millionaire, here? :)
WolfishPennings chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Great little fic thx very much for sharing.:-):-):-):-)
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
That would be really awful for the paperwork.
PumpkinSpiceLatte chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
"I don't know anyone who would come". And
"I don't know what I'm supposed to do"
Are perfect renditions of Steve.
Perfect
ym4yum1 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This is so meaningful...

"Everything, he wanted to scream. Explain why things had to change. Bring Peggy and Bucky back! Leave me in the ice!"

Best things here:

1) Colonel Rogers is perfect! He deserves this recognition! The full pack!
2) Women around him, not being his love interest. The agent, the major. He doesn't have to fall in love with the 1st woman he sees. He's mourning Peggy. It'll take time.

Kudos! and I'm a HUGE nerd too! yay! ;)
Baron Raedeclyffe chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Finally, a fanfic writer who's willing to give a little reality to Cap! You actually remembered (unlike many fanfickers) that Cap's a soldier first and a superhero second. YAY! Thank you also for the realistic portrayal of paperwork. Haha. I'm from an Army family, paperwork has become something of a running gag/nightmare for the uncles, cousins, and great-uncles in my family.
Twin chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This was awesome! Great fiction, please keep writing. :)
Wolf of the Western Woods chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I always feel so bad for poor Steve! That would be my worst nightmare. And I'm a minor comic book fan, but right now I like the movie better anyway, considering that Umtimate Captain America sucks. Good job with characterization, i could see what was going on!
sudoku chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I think this is what supposed to happen in Cap 2 movie. I wish it happens in The Avengers, I guess that's what fanfic is for.
Historian1912 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Not in the military myself, but most of my family has served. I didn't think about it when watching the movie, but now that I think about it, Captain Roger's situation would have been a paperwork nightmare. Good story.
Haruka Minamino chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I love the pathos and the sheer overwhelming confusion and sadness that the Captain feels here. You've got movieverse!Steve so well.

Great bonus of you actually knowing what you're writing about - in most fic universes, it's really hardly ever the case.
starsandstillness chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I love all the little details in this story, all the things Steve thinks and notices. Very well done. Thanks.
Proponent of EVO chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I really liked it. You took a somewhat mundane situation and used it a a framework for a good 'man outside of time' story. Well done, thanks for writing!
Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
As soon as I read the summary I thought "Someone in the military wrote this." (I was in the Navy so I know how the government gets with their paperwork .)

Anyway, awesome little fic here. I was really able to feel for poor Steve. Keep up the good work .
HKay chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Thank you for sharing this story.
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