I am sorry I am not really great at reviewing. I simply know what I like and what I don't. I loved this story. I have you down as one of my favorite authors and will be reading some of your other work. Your story style is something that I really am looking forward to exploring. Thank you for the tale.

I am sorry if you are getting flames. I am really enjoying the story and love how you are incorporating the wizarding world with the human world. Keep up the good work.

I loved the chapter. I think it is an interesting premise. I look forward to reading more. Love your author's note at the end.

Is…is Natasja now the rightful owner of the Elder Wand?

Snape getting cracked over the head with a pan and Moody saying, "No problems here." makes way too much sense.

*Ouch! Comparing Flophart to JarJar Binks is truly an insult to all Gungans across the universe! Old Flopsy there is less competent that a flobberworm on a 3 week bender of peyote, tequila & LSD...

I really love Natasha's viewpoint on Dumbledore! The no-nonsense practicality and skepticism is such fun to read

To your first question I answer absolutely yes yes yes. I can’t believe how Harry was just expected to die and he accepted that.

Great job! Good story! A little vanilla for me, but definitely well written!

One idea I had is 'what if'; James and Lily Potter had made arrangements just in-case anything happened to them AND to Sirius; in the event that James, Lily AND Sirius were, all, unable to care for Harry, they arranged for a family house-elf (or even a team of house-elves) to take under-age Harry into hiding (at a back-up safehouse they told no-one else of, not even Sirius, for security reasons) and care for him until either James, Lily &/or Sirius were able to care for Harry again, OR Harry was of-age to care for himself...?

Very nice story. I often wonder what was going on in JKRs brain, or if her background wan't a good one. All our backgrounds shape the people we turn into.
Thanks for the story. I'm sorry I couldn't find your book on Amazon... oh well, I did only search in my country and the US. More stories to read and can't waste too much time. I makes me itchy if I'm not reading, and writing instead.
Kind regards.

I love this story! Thank you so much for sharing your talent for writing

Loved the story!

One problem. Everyone or mostly everyone seems to forget not all suburbia is tame so you might have coyotes or other animals that would pick a baby up and walk away and eat. So yeah, he could have got eaten

really enjoyed this story!