Reviews for The Paths Diverge
Meridiean chapter 17 . 10/17/2022
I LOVE IT! Great job! Love the idea of Harry Halloweening with his kids and that Nat's still around and doing well, and that Hermione and Padme make politicians cry!

I'm really glad that you've turned your humongous talent into writing for reals - the world always needs fantastic writers!
Princess Asuna chapter 1 . 10/17/2022
so reading the description tells me VERY little about this story, as does reading the first chapter itself. Is Natasja an OC?
Pteaset chapter 1 . 10/17/2022
Love it
Lauzag chapter 10 . 10/17/2022
Another feminist story you might like is “clever Gretchen and other folk tales”. All feminist protagonists and all kick arse toughies
BMS chapter 17 . 10/17/2022
Cute.
Meridiean chapter 7 . 10/16/2022
I've read this story a dozen times and one of the themes that keeps bringing me back to it is that people can be capable regardless of their perceived power. Like with Nat being smart and aware enough of her surroundings to EFFECTIVELY use kitchen implements on Powerful People threatening her family. I love the common sense approach to so many things in this story and how just because someone is A GIRL (or A WOMAN) does not in any way mean that she is weaker - her strengths may just "bubble and boil" in other areas...like having great aim with barbecue tools, lol.
I wish you'd had time/inspiration to write a dozen more stories along the lines of this one!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/16/2022
Poor Remus just had to go about it all in exactly the wrong way. Imagine how much good he could have been for the family if he'd KNOCKED ON THE DOOR...
OmaBlack chapter 7 . 10/13/2022
I got one like that, teachers would accuse me of writing her papers. LOL. Made the teacher tell me the definition, most could not but my 1st grader could.
bahnannah chapter 3 . 10/9/2022
I loved that not only did she clock Snape one, but gave dumbledore the dobby treatment with the arm!

Yes I’m rereading this. Lol.
Light on the Horizon chapter 16 . 10/4/2022
Great “what if?” story
Guest chapter 16 . 10/3/2022
Enjoyed reading your version of Harry Potter . Well sone
Guest chapter 11 . 9/22/2022
There is NO way you are being too tough on Lockhart, I am appalled that he was EVER hired in the first place!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2022
I had a little one use the word hypothesis and explained what the word meant
Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2022
Ignore people like that! This story has an interesting perspective being told by a Muggle. I'm 60 years old and am enjoying your story very much, especially Mad Eye!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/3/2022
Aw… I love this book! It’s so sweet, and I love Natasja!
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