Reviews for The Paths Diverge
xikum chapter 17 . 9/29/2024
Very satisfying ending! Thank you very much!
xikum chapter 15 . 9/29/2024
Brill! Way of offing Voldie! One Black magic (Voodoo) destroying another (a Dark Lord), the doll used for a good purpose. Loved it!
xikum chapter 11 . 9/29/2024
Finally! Harry needed to leave Hogwarts, and it won't hurt the others, especially with them all being tutored as a group. They will all have both the education and the social skills development needed.
xikum chapter 8 . 9/28/2024
I love how Harry sees both magic and mundane methods as equally amazing!
xikum chapter 4 . 9/28/2024
Great that you got them together! By any chance, is Natasja a squib?
xikum chapter 2 . 9/28/2024
Love Natasja catching both Dumbles and Snape by surprise! But now they are forewarned. As well, how no love is lost between the MLE and Snape. Hope Harry stays safe! And maybe they move someplace the wix don't know where?
bookivore chapter 1 . 9/13/2024
I just caught that they dismissed some Potters an elderly couple with teenagers - teen pregnancy is a thing, and police would know that. As a reader though I skipped right over it.
kyurega chapter 4 . 9/9/2024
I wanna say that this is a rather uncharitable depiction of Arthur Weasley, but then I think about it, and I realize that he absolutely WOULD pull this kinda shit.
khatre chapter 4 . 9/2/2024
In defense of Arthur it is not particularly easy to tell what things are put into the books as a one off joke .. like say Arthur not knowing what a rubber duck is used for .. or say witches and wizards not knowing how to dress themselves at as major international sporting event ..
and more serious topics like
Molly Weasleys offhand comment about using love potions on Arthur and the easy way that magical society lets Draco call people Mudbloods and Blood Traitors ...
Arthur is a honest , hard working , loving father of 7 yet somehow does not know what a childrens toy is? ... yea ... makes no actual sense. I can understand him not knowing electricity. Its just not part of his world. Hell ... most Real World people have little to no idea how Electricity is generated!
IdkbutIsortado chapter 7 . 8/14/2024
honestly i dont think its that unrealistic. I mean some kids are just like that, for example I was always that kid who knew the meaning of like every word. Besides I doubt anyone will really care that much, as long as they dont suddenly become philosophical
Bronze chapter 17 . 8/10/2024
I can't blame Harry and Susan for wanting to simply enjoy Halloween without the morons in the ministry spoiling it. Whoever that Dragon was he's extremely lucky he never met me on that night. By age twelve I carried a homemade bag for my candy which got quite heavy before the night was out. I had to kids attempt to steal it from me only to learn I had other ideas. I swung that bag at the one steering the bike taking him right off of it. His partner was sitting facing back the way they'd come. I walked away laughing. I was a mean little shit at that age.
Bronze chapter 16 . 8/10/2024
I am so glad you DIDN'T follow the trend or JKR in naming the children. I can't understand why Harry would name two of his children after the two men who caused him the most pain and trouble in his life. I mean Albus Severus? Really? Not fucking way!
Bronze chapter 15 . 8/10/2024
Yeah, because the adults used their brains for once!
Bronze chapter 14 . 8/10/2024
I've felt for a very long time that the so-called Prophecy was a total load of exceptionally low-grade shit. The only way it really fits Harry is because Good Ole Fumblemort made damn sure he heard as much of it as Fumblemort wanted him to. Which was just enough to send him after both the Potters and Longbottoms. Had Fumblemort actually used what passes for a brain he'd've used his office in Hogwarts for the interview. It is secure with no way of listening at the door. First you need to get past the Gargoyle statue that guards the door, Next, you have to get the door to open in order to use the stairs. Finally, you need to get the door to the office itself open. All this without the headmaster knowing you're doing it.
Bronze chapter 13 . 8/10/2024
Two broken arms thanks to Harry and one hell of a major headache as well as having his testis punctured must have made for a very poor welcome back to the world of the living. Not to mention the pain involved from the second one.
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