| Reviews for The Paths Diverge |
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   fractalman chapter 2 . 4/10/2023 a bit heavy on the bashing, but only a little and it's rather amusing. |
| Books85 chapter 16 . 3/30/2023 I believe |
| LoneTraveler chapter 2 . 3/22/2023 This is a case of telling rather than showing. Doesn’t make for an interesting story. Goodbye. |
| Jan chapter 1 . 3/21/2023 Don't know why it's described as "middle of winter" when the beginning of October is still firmly within autumn season. |
| mlj11100 chapter 14 . 3/15/2023 Une seule critique : c'est trop court, bien trop court... Les fous rires sont tellement libérateurs ! Merci encore |
| mlj11100 chapter 2 . 3/14/2023 Je ne dirais pas que cette histoire craint, ni que tu ne devrais plus écrire. Au contraire ! je suis en train de rigoler toute seule en la lisant et ça fait un bien fou ! Continue |
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/8/2023 Honestly, it seems more like a summary of a story than a story itself, otherwise this has been entertaining to read |
| Harryliada chapter 17 . 2/28/2023 je me suis régalée ,merci |
| Harryliada chapter 13 . 2/27/2023 L'histoire n'est pas nulle j'adore cette façon d'écrire , peut être parceque je ne peux pas délayer mes idées , mais c'est explicite (sans descriptions superflues), net et succint le top! |
| Harryliada chapter 12 . 2/27/2023 Bonjour et qu'en est il du rat? Lupin est au chateau, Sirius est libre , il devrait être attrapé pour éviter qu'il serve son Maître. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/18/2023 Ich mag deine Geschichte sehr. Mal etwas vollkommen anderes. Mir gefällt dein Stil. Mag sogar deine Kommentare |
| danielkaelliott chapter 8 . 2/17/2023 why would you introduce kids by their full name? or even yourself for that matter? |
| danielkaelliott chapter 2 . 2/17/2023 really lucky because the chances of them being related by five degrees of separation is quite small. I wonder if there's something that'll make it seem more likely like she moved there because her ancestors lived there or something. |
| Jake Crepeau chapter 15 . 2/16/2023 Be interesting to find out how they got a bit of Voldy's hair (nonexistent), skin, blood, spit, etc., to get that bit of sympathetic magic to work. |
| Jake Crepeau chapter 13 . 2/16/2023 Ummm...there's a definite inconsistency there. Polished metal? Where? If you're referring to Nat's skillet, cast iron is NOT polished metal; it's a flat black. Unless she's using Le Creuset, which is cast iron coated with enamel on the outside (and sometimes on the inside, too), and that's not even close to reflective enough. Trust me. I cook with both. (And, BTW, I own a marble rolling pin, too! And did I mention I'm a redhead? ;D) |