|Reviews for Under one Umbrella|
| xMousex chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Awe! Hijikata should've just taken her by the waist and kissed her! Nobody would have been surprised- err except Chizuru xD. I really enjoyed this one shot, it was a very calm read haha. Thanks for writing this cute one shot!
| fatima chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
great story i love it
| fakir51 chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
i loved it
keep up the god work
| xMoonlightDarknessx chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Very cute story! :) I loved it!
| Stellar chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
really? only a oneshot? can you make another chapter for this? its a real cute story!
| iWandering-Shapeshifter chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
-gushes- THIS WAS SO CUTE.
Hijikata's clamming up and stalling telling his feelings to Chizuru is adorable as well as slightly frustrating. frustrating because he takes FOREVER to actually spill his guts to her (i'll bite it's promising, given i still ship this pairing first and foremost when it comes to the Hakuouki franchise), and adorable because, as a tough-as-nails badass samurai who was renowned for his bravery and honor, him acting like an awkward tongue-tied teenage boy is like night and day.
great job on this for your first fic! very well done, i hope you'll write more Hakuouki fics in the future. (:
| Akane-Rihime chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
this is very sweet...hijikata chizuru forever! 3
| Leanne chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Ohmygod. This is fanastic! It's sweet and shows that Hijikata loved Chizuru just as much as she loved him.
| Shinaeshi chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
i love it! 3
| mochaleaf55 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I LOVEEEEEEEEEE THIS ! COULD U PLEASE CONTINUE THIS?!
| FlyingChange chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Love this story! I like how you kept them in character as well. :3
| phantome101 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Ooooo...it is really wonderful. I was expecting Hijikata to snap the umbrella in two
| Krolshi chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Well, time to learn the rain dance who's with me! BDDD
Hehe, oh Hijikata ;3 When it comes to love mostly everyone, whether it'd be a romantic or a warrior, feels weak haaa it's so cute seeing him like this Cx ohhh my shipper heart! You'll get the chance! Hijikata-San! I'll make sure of it! WAHAHAHAH!
Lol anyways great story! It's so super uber omfg cute! Thank you so much for writing this! You've done a great job writing this :D
| RaddestBaddestBirdInTown chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
...that was so fluffy. I love how you portrayed his thoughts, though...not sure how accurate it was. Can't tell if it's incredibly accurate or way off mark...yeah, I suck at characterization, but my guess is it was accurate, so good job Love the fluff
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
so sweet and beautiful!
nicely written! it's so emotional and conveyed Hijikata's felling so well! :3