Reviews for My Cold World
Ehytil chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
Great story would like to read the sequel
Arikashika5985 chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
aww, that's cute
yoshimoriXsenXgen chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
That was really cute I love it
BloodyWolf83 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
sunflora263 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
so cute
The hybrid who likes to write chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
AWWW, so cute! Though I have to say, your grammar does need a little work. not much, just little touches here and there, and's and as he's, things like that, little conjunctions every so often. Makes it easier to read and know what's going on. Hope to read more of this!
Hi welcome to Denny's chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Let me start out by saying that this was good. But, there was a minor flaw.

You kinda made Sen OOC. Now, I noticed this in your other Kekkaishi Fanfictions, (Which I liked)and I think if you made him a little less Winy and mopey, then you would have some truly great fanfictions.

Anyway, I think you should make a sequal to this. It was quite entertaining.
ThePuppet chapter 1 . 9/1/2011

I loves it! So cute! I just adore Yoshi and Sen together! Great job!
SasunaruXNarusasu chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
That was soo fucking adorable I actually started to cry! Damn I'm such a sap fir this shit lol
RedArsenic chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Aww! It was so sweet. I thought is was amazing. It was fluffy and adorable. I loved this story and I hope you make a sequel.

No Sen, I don't think your disgusting! I think your adorable! You need someone like Yoshimori to love you.

I really liked this story, Plaese make a sequel!