Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki: A ninja in the making
kingrobert84 chapter 17 . 12/19/2013
doin awesome man are you gonna finish this great story? and if so whens update?
Williamgbirkin chapter 17 . 4/18/2013
This is an awesome story and I can't wait for more. Can you make this a Naruto x Kurotsuchi fic? It's a nice pairing and there aren't enough of them.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/27/2012
next update please
serialkeller chapter 17 . 10/11/2012
Cannot wait for the next chapter this is awesome. I hope that what naruto gave shikamaru allows him to make his hide and move in the shadows jutsu. Also hope that naruto learned the hiraishin on the sly without jiraiya knowing, that would be epic :D
whitedorumon chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
Mizuki could not possibly kill an ANBU... the very idea is laughable, i mean unless you've given him a SERIOUS boost from the level that Canon!Mizuki was at this stage then your leaving some pretty obvuious plot holes to be honest.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/18/2012
LOVED IT! I loved it a lot! I was really surprised at the end when Oonoki revealed the fact that he knew abut orochi's invasion plan! and I also really loved those parts where Naruto revealed the truth about his heritage and the Kyūbi to sasuke and shika. I loved how those three get together so well! I loved how naruto's so good with seals, and how sasuke's not brooding and power hungry anymore. He's opening up, nice! And as for the future chapters, are you going to let naruto learn the hiraishin and perform it, now that he's accessible to his Father's safe house in the concealed in the woods? (I just love the hiraishin) Probably along with his tench coat and the three pronged kunai, when telling the news to the village? I'd love that!
A chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
I knew it fics like that always such crappy mistakes teams always have 2 boys and 1 girl yeah i know this is your fic but other people read it did you bother read the manga? That is why you only have 91 reviews instead of 1 think about you have an amazing idea but since i read the 'team 7' i stop reading fix your mistakes dude
spiritwolf35 chapter 17 . 6/7/2012
So far the story is pretty good and I cant wait to read more of it so please update soon
kwrobes chapter 17 . 6/5/2012
Great story! Keep updating.
Van der Ay chapter 17 . 6/4/2012
Your writing ability certainly has improved since chapter 1. Just wanted you to know that :)
spiritwolf35 chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
So far I actually like this story I just hope Naruto doesnt decide to help Orochimaru because of Kabuto I hope he stay good oh well please update soon
spiritwolf35 chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
So far the story seems ok so please update soon
BioHazard82 chapter 17 . 6/1/2012
Another great chapter.
Aiten Kaito chapter 16 . 5/12/2012
odd it says it was updated recently but I'm pretty sure I've read this chapter oh well looking forward to the next update
Ymere chapter 16 . 5/4/2012
great job so far. I rarely find stories as well done as this one. I am glad kabuto helped naruto at the beginning still i hope that that does not lead to naruto following him. Thus far there has been no real signs that that would be the case especially since he serves orochimaru and said snake has tried to kill him and has harmed his team. In any case i still await to see the pairing which i hope will not be hinata. It seems like you may be leading towards kurotsuchi. Thanks for writing
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