Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki: A ninja in the making
Kain129 chapter 17 . 3/1
keepit up im really enjoying this story
Quillion9000 chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
It's a shame you haven't written more to this story. I found it to be quite enjoyable.
Kyoya hatake chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
So far the story is a diamond in the rough. It has potential, and the idea is quite interesting in my humble opininion.
However, you got the speech patterns all wrong. A kid who isn't even 10 wouldn't know or use words like must or become. Especially if they're like naruto, who seems to have trouble with academics. Regardless this is something I'm hoping you'll find useful if you've yet to complete the story.
Ryuu842 chapter 12 . 2/11/2016
How dare you make Naruto seem so weak in this fight! Naruto is better than that. Your just a Sasuke fanboy that wants him to have all the glory! I'm so disappointed. I though you were going to give everyone a fair advantage in this story (with their own specialized techniques), but it seems that your just a second rate author that specializes in favoritism.
Ryuu842 chapter 12 . 2/11/2016
Will you stop giving away all of Naruto's skills? It's getting annoying.
Ryuu842 chapter 8 . 2/11/2016
Why are you having Sasuke learn seals? I think Naruto should be the only one on the team to do them.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2015
You idiot did you Even read the manga. If you did you would know that sasuke lost his family during the academy
Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2015
While your fanfic wasn't as good as it could be. Thank you! There are so many fics where Naruto joins other villages and the village he came from originally seems to be okay with it and it makes no sense there would obviously be war. I mean Godson of a Sannin, Son of the Yondaime hokage, uzumaki essentially meaning having senju blood, and kyubbi jinjuriki losing something like that Koahna would immediatly go to war
kingrobert84 chapter 17 . 12/19/2013
doin awesome man are you gonna finish this great story? and if so whens update?
Williamgbirkin chapter 17 . 4/18/2013
This is an awesome story and I can't wait for more. Can you make this a Naruto x Kurotsuchi fic? It's a nice pairing and there aren't enough of them.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/27/2012
next update please
serialkeller chapter 17 . 10/11/2012
Cannot wait for the next chapter this is awesome. I hope that what naruto gave shikamaru allows him to make his hide and move in the shadows jutsu. Also hope that naruto learned the hiraishin on the sly without jiraiya knowing, that would be epic :D
whitedorumon chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
Mizuki could not possibly kill an ANBU... the very idea is laughable, i mean unless you've given him a SERIOUS boost from the level that Canon!Mizuki was at this stage then your leaving some pretty obvuious plot holes to be honest.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/18/2012
LOVED IT! I loved it a lot! I was really surprised at the end when Oonoki revealed the fact that he knew abut orochi's invasion plan! and I also really loved those parts where Naruto revealed the truth about his heritage and the Kyūbi to sasuke and shika. I loved how those three get together so well! I loved how naruto's so good with seals, and how sasuke's not brooding and power hungry anymore. He's opening up, nice! And as for the future chapters, are you going to let naruto learn the hiraishin and perform it, now that he's accessible to his Father's safe house in the concealed in the woods? (I just love the hiraishin) Probably along with his tench coat and the three pronged kunai, when telling the news to the village? I'd love that!
A chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
I knew it fics like that always such crappy mistakes teams always have 2 boys and 1 girl yeah i know this is your fic but other people read it did you bother read the manga? That is why you only have 91 reviews instead of 1 think about you have an amazing idea but since i read the 'team 7' i stop reading fix your mistakes dude
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