Reviews for The Sun at Night
Tobirion chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Oh wow, this was just beautiful. Loved it, loved it.
Rose chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Continue it. These two are having such a hard time, they need to end up with each other. It's beautiful so far, so keep it up!
Glitter chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
More
spiel chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Thank you so much for the interesting read! :D
Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
I really like this story, and would love to see more of it. This world has some interesting dynamics here.

I like the background you built for each character, especially Cloud, and how you worked some of the Cannon stuff in, but spun it to fit this world...

Well written. Good read.
SelKar chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
It's an interesting idea, I would love to read another chapter.

See ya,

SelKar
cloudstrife747 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
wow please continue this its brilliant! i was hooked till the end!
PhantomPanther chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Really enjoyed this; you have a gift. Please write more...or something similar, anyway. -phantom
zararem2122 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Wow . . . Really this is brillaint, really well written, the fanfiction on the whole is just such a good read. really well done I love this! xxx
Nightmaric chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
It's brill so far! And you're right about feeling half way about this. I read it twice and I'm going to myself, "This would be awesome with more chapters! ...but that kinda takes away the vagueness of it all... but I want more Angeal/Cloud... ARGH." XD Sorry I'm no help in that topic.
PolyGriffin chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Again, wow. I am amazed by your characterizations and your style is just impeccable. It's really flexible and you have great hand at molding the mood of a story. Cloud was perfectly quiet, sarcastic, hesitant, but vaguely friendly. Not really angsty but more reflective. And Angeal was his sturdy self. Even when he's down in the dumps he can find his laughter and sort of wryly but not depressingly contemplate his life. Two people who are strong, but not perfect alone. Perfect! "And at the end of it all, Angeal was happy for that." That line just killed me (in a good way).

I appreciated the dry humor as well.

love,

PolyG
skywright chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Well, I'm not very good at being descisive for authors, mainly because it is their choice on whether to continue a stand-alone into something more. I liked it because it was dramatic without seeming too much like a soap opera/ Usually Cloud( in these types of fanficcs) is depicted as either completely pure and naive, or as bad as you can get. You, whoever have captured a part that I believe is in the real CLoud's character. Like anyone he gets down and depressed and he may need a little help to feel happy again, but in the end he is matter of fact and honest with how his life is. Seeing the pairing is also interesting, but makes me wish for more.( Simply because most stories involving Angeal or Genesis paired with Cloud end up as one shots). Over all pretty good, especially with mood and descriptions.
Youkai Ryuu chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is a really well written story. I love the tone and characterization of Cloud and Angeal. I do agree that there was a sort of finality to the ending, but I really would like to read more of this. So... to be more precise, please write more D
Namicchi chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
O my... It was absolutely amazing and very touching. I love this atmosphere, characters and Angeal/Cloud ;) Their histories are very sad, but now they have each other. Sort of. Words from "The sun rose" to the end were perfect and the last line... It's the best end I could imagine.

I was happy seeing another ff with them, especially so beautiful well-written. Please, update it, okay? *puppy eyes*

Also I saw on your profile that you have been working at AGSZC fic. You know I already love you, right? ;)

BTW friendly advice: change raiting. There are sexual references and 'T' would be better.
Haeliegh chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Oh wow goodness. I absolutely adore AngealxCloud and I love the world you've created for them. I like how you didn't go too far into Genesis' relationship with (I'm assuming) Sephiroth, but I was expecting some sort of Zack reference. Also, Rufus could be in cahoots with the gang of Turks. Idk, giving them drugs for money or something sleazy.

I also think it's neat how you bolder the first letter of some of the paragraphs! Super cute.

I really, really, really hope you delve a little deeper into the relationship. Maybe make a world of it. Like a prequel about Angeal and Genesis and Cloud and The Turk (Reno?)

And continue to either the next time they see each other or even a future relationship or something, idk.

I just would be soososososososososooooo happy if you continued! :)
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