Reviews for Destiny
ElementalMiko12 chapter 38 . 1/16/2017
(please don't feel discouraged) loved it however all the constant misspelling mistakes kept making it difficult for me to stay focused on your story. For examle, carrying which was meant to be caring. More often then not I also noticed words were either missing or arranged in the wrong order which caused me to have to make up those portions myself. but like I said I love the story, I love the plot, I just wish that you spent some time rereading over your work before you posted this. Checking over your work can makes all the difference.
ElementalMiko12 chapter 2 . 1/7/2017
and im hooked
ElementalMiko12 chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
interesting start :o
Guest chapter 18 . 12/12/2016
I loved it
helly1bradleywyatt chapter 38 . 4/30/2016
Brilliant, loved this, a different stance on now the couple may have developed!
crime fictiction chapter 38 . 11/9/2015
u have successfully fulfilled urdestiny with this story then in my view
crime fictiction chapter 37 . 11/9/2015
i think jane was a little insensitive it was after all mauras first day
crime fictiction chapter 36 . 11/9/2015
well the only other thing is kids
crime fictiction chapter 35 . 11/9/2015
i like simple not boring proposals i dont like gradiose ones like ur trying to hard as long as u r saying it from the heart thats all that matters in my opinion
crime fictiction chapter 34 . 11/9/2015
i think janes reaction wasnt good kinda rude i think maura was trying to be supportive to jane and it was a really nice thing to do
crime fictiction chapter 33 . 11/9/2015
somethings never change lol you have to talk about ur fears it hinders growth if u dont
crime fictiction chapter 32 . 11/9/2015
communication is a big part of a relationship how many relationships break up coz ppl dont or wont communicate
crime fictiction chapter 31 . 11/9/2015
wow thats drama it reminds me of someone i know that writes brilliant angst
crime fictiction chapter 30 . 11/9/2015
u did fine its hard to write this kind of stuff so dont feel bad it takes time aand being with someone intimately things have to be done right otherwise u just cause pain instead of enjoyment
crime fictiction chapter 29 . 11/9/2015
i think shes worked hard and the willingness to learn new stuff and rememberring wat u have already learnt is a good base to go up the ladder and with jane she likes a challenge and no maura wont bring up marriage coz shes happy as she is as janes gf
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