Reviews for A Love Not Meant For Sharing
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Swirling Dreams chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
That was so f-ing hot. Seriously. I absolutely loved that. You wrote a wonderful, steamy story. The writing was absolutely beaufiful, and I'm actually going to be reading your other Quill stories tonight, so you might hear that a lot. I hope you don't get tired of that.
Only one thing more though. It's not "Sweaty". Or "Sweaty", ; it's "Sweaty." And "Sweaty,". The punctuation comes before the quotation mark. Besides that it was excellent. No typos!
malfoymaiden chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I absolutely LOVED this, and not because of the smut. I could see an actual relationship; I could see the love! You did it right. Well done!
agronderwood chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
that was amazing! I love them as a couple!
radargrrl chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
You do a good job capturing Quinn's "regal being" especially with the phrase "she snorted through her nose and she raised a majestic eyebrow". I like how she is so HBIC but at the same time she likes that Will is possessive of her. Most women want our independence but also enjoy giving ourselves to a man, romantically and sexually (as long as it is on our terms.) Male writers often just don't get that. You do a terrific job capturing the eroticism of the sex that Will and Quinn have. You have just enough porny-perviness combined with the build up to the sex that is every bit as important as the sexual act itself. I hate when fan fiction is obviously written by people who have watched way too much porn and not actually had enough sex to know that there is a steaminess and a build-up that needs to be present to build up antici-PATION! for the banging. LOL. Of course, I enjoy the fact that they are involved in a forbidden love affair. Those are the best to read about. Thanks for writing!