Reviews for Mirror Shards
Zarianwen chapter 5 . 2/13
First I have to say that I really enjoyed the first three one-shots, especially Birth of a Demon.
Second, I have forgotten everything else I wanted to say about those because the ending of this one ripped a hole in my heart that is going to require some stitches.
I'm just going to sit here in silence and stare into space for a few moments while I try to digest this without tearing up.
TangoUnicornA chapter 8 . 12/11/2014
I feel like crying. That was an unexpected ending, but I like it. I like the idea of Rin being a good father like that, just like Shiro, and the idea of Rin's kid turning out like him.
... Just makes it sadder, doesn't it.
WHY.
TheHallow chapter 4 . 9/5/2014
Ohhhhh man, I actually really like this chapter XD i wish it was waaayyy longer hahaha
paracuties chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
Oh my God. I feel like crying. Like, seriously. I got to the end and I just stared at the screen for a minute, mouth agape and eyes bugging out, and then I had to read it all over again, this time knowing who was actually speaking. OH. MY. GOD. This is seriously, amazingly, well...amazing. And I get how he can actually refer to Shura as an "old bat", now! XD

Like, the FEELS. I am dying here, drowning in feels here. Please. Help me. Your writing is amazing.

I LOVE THIS. I love that he's visiting RIN, not Shiro, but...RIN. He's RIN'S son! OMG. That was certainly unexpected. But even better than if it were Shiro Rin was visiting, 'cause now...we can see that Rin became everything he wanted to be, and died an early death like his own adoptive father, and thought all the same things and -

Well. I love that.

Keep up the great work!
paracuties chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
...Aw. Poor Rin. He's super worried about Yukio and *that's* what finally drives him to go further and really, actually push himself. I like that you made him a Tamer and Dragoon, because honestly, Rin should technically have command over almost all demons and with his strong will, he could *technically* summon anything he wanted. So. I really wish they made him a Tamer canonically, but I like what you did here too!

Keep up the good work!
paracuties chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
:OOOOO OH MY GOD. WHAT DID YOU DO.

...This is extremely well-written, though, and I can't help but wish you continued this. Continued into a different AU, a really cool one, and...well. I enjoyed this.
paracuties chapter 4 . 7/31/2014
Huh...I'm really curious as to which situation they got themselves into to meet Satan? O.o I like this, though! Keep writing!
paracuties chapter 3 . 7/31/2014
Hm...I like Mephisto's thoughts, here. I don't necessarily like how he dismisses Fujimoto as just another Paladin who trusted a Demon King, but that's more...realistic, too, I think.

I really enjoyed this piece! Keep writing!
paracuties chapter 2 . 7/31/2014
...Aw :'( Different, quite different, but still extremely tragic! Sweet, though, how Mephisto appears and helps and Fujimoto's there wavering between duty and the right thing to do - really, really sweet how he still cannot kill the twins in the end. Although...it makes me wonder about an AU, where Fujimoto *does* kill Rin... O.o

Keep up the good work!
Mistletainn chapter 8 . 7/28/2014
What do you mean? That was lighthearted, right? I can just feel the fluff. Rin's life might have been short, but if his son's narration is anything to go by, it was a fulfilling one. He managed to became the paladin(and possibly managed his triple meister of knight-tamer-dragoon), and he was surrounded by a 'family' that loved him.

Such an envious life, even at such cost, it was definitely worth having.
SpazzyLassy105 chapter 8 . 6/27/2014
OH MY GOD WHAT.
WHAT.
WHAT THE-
OH
MY
GOD
YOU GENIOUS BASTARD
HOLY CRAP
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I CANT EVEN-
IT WAS RIN ALL ALONG, OH MY GOD HIS KID I LIKE HIM
HOOOOOLLLYYYY CRRAAPPPP
Magician'sValkyria1208 chapter 8 . 1/2/2014
I pretty much cried reading this last one.

It's too real.
I think I suspected what was going on - but actually reading the last paragraph made it soooo real. It was like a punch to the gut.

Great work.
Kaylessa chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
Woah...O_O That was GOOD. I mean, I hope to heaven and back that this particular scenario never happens, but my GOSH, you wrote it so well! Oh, poor Rin, he thought he had it all under control, but no one knows how to hurt us like Satan. Guh! Man, that was good.
ichiruzuka chapter 8 . 11/2/2013
...Yep, you should write more lighthearted story.
Drakonflight chapter 8 . 9/11/2013
OK, this one made me cry. I love how you built off the idea of Rin becoming Paladin from the last chapter. And btw, I agree with Rin; the current Paladin is an ass.
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