|Reviews for The One That Belongs|
| CaandyyCat chapter 12 . 11/5/2016
Amazing! I love this story because it actually is how Ash would act. In other stories he's more romantic and such, but he's the opposite of that and pretty much dense. :) this is my favorite story by far!
| Nami chapter 16 . 7/14/2016
Awww that was just adorable.
Too bad she has to tell him about Delia
| Nami chapter 15 . 7/14/2016
WHAAAT. Why'd you kill poor Delia?! TT_TT
| Nami chapter 14 . 7/14/2016
Oh, so he did feel bad. All is right in the world! -gets shot-
| Nami chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
He kissed her while she slept? :o
That's cute... and kinda disturbing at the same time. He should've at least felt a little guilty haha.
| Nami chapter 12 . 7/13/2016
I enjoy to see poor Ashy suffering too LOL
| Nami chapter 9 . 7/13/2016
What, I thought Dawn had given up.
OMG, SICK CONFESSION?
| Nami chapter 8 . 7/13/2016
Yay, so they went to the date!
Finally a date goes right for poor Ash XD
| Nami chapter 7 . 7/13/2016
Nooo, I wanted to see Misty's date XD.
May doesn't really like him, that's why the date wasn't as bad, right?
| Nami chapter 6 . 7/13/2016
Poor Dawn, what a terrible date!
I can't wait for the date with Misty XD
| Nami chapter 5 . 7/13/2016
They're practically forcing him into double-timing LOL
| Nami chapter 4 . 7/13/2016
Omg, they're just throwing themselves at him LOL
| Nami chapter 3 . 7/13/2016
Oooh man, this is so good.
I'm laughing my ass out.
Poor Dawn LOL
| Pokeshipping77 chapter 15 . 5/31/2016
What is the name of the squeal?
| Pokeshipping77 chapter 16 . 5/31/2016
There has to be a squeal please it is so awesome and romantic best fanfiction ever! Pokeshipping 4 ever! We have to be best buds man its awesome pokeshipping 4 ever do u agree.