Reviews for What Goes Around Cums Around
rdmickey1989 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Hey honey. OK I waited until chp 124 of Offside to read. I didn't even know you had written anything for it until I saw at Twific or RobAttack.

Boy you really wanted him to be 100% humiliated. My jaw was dropped and I was snickering the whole time.
RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Bahahahhaaa! Love that he took it up the ass and then took himself out freaking over it! Brilliant!

Cared chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Oh Liz, I loved the twist with the Ladyboy.

I never want to get on your bad side! LMAO
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
brilliant...thank you...:)
Mil4u4u chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Didn't expect the ladyboy but a nice twist and a fitting humiliation for Carlisle.
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Ooooh, Fluffy! You evil, evil h00r! Great job, sista - now you ain't a FF virgin either! *fist bump*
Just Sus chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Oh, great job, Lizzie! This was awesome...Carlisle got screwed in more ways than one. Somehow, I don't think he'll be seeing Esme in Heaven...he's going the other way for all the things he's his son, and to many others.

I liked this one a lot. Somehow, it makes me feel vindicated...for Edward!

Thanks, bb...

drtammy1511 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
This is the first entry that realistically portrays not only the characters in the story, but an actual scene that could play out. Not to mention that Carlisle definitely gets his in the end, pun definitely intended. You have my vote. Congratulations.
vampiresarenotamyth chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
That was perfect. It's just what he deserves...a good ass fuck before he dies.
GoreLoverGirl69 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Oh snap.
fuz chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Well, yes, he deserves it. Thank you.
nightline chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Excuse me for a moment, I think I'm going to be sick from the last image...

Uh, all better now. You really gave Carlisle what he deserved...
SatinCoveredSteel chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I liked this one—very well written! Sick as hell, mind you, but a delicious punishment for the man everyone loves to hate! :P
Pattypattz chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Fluffy, that was pretty cool, and twisted, but I liked it.

I guess no-one explained karma to Carlisle huh? Well it can be a bitch, or in this case...dressed up like a bitch, but really a man. "What comes around, goes around".

Good one girl. You should consider writing a full lenght story for us! Cheers sista H00R!
Roshambo83 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Loved it! Very well written. Good idea and you got inside Daddy C's head really well.

Sweet revenge.
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