|Reviews for black veil brides:disaster|
| tears of venom chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
CHELSEA! How could u use me in ur story :o
Any way, constructive criticism,
When u wrote '"I'm out" called jinxx. Jinx had..." it would have been less repetitive if you wrote '"I'm out." called jinxx, he had..." try and not use the same words over...
Anyways apart from that it's good, keep writing :)