Reviews for And All My Dreams Torn Asunder
Khaleesi221B chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Hot, hot, HOT! Really great! :)
beyondobsessed chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
lol was that my author's note? this was a good story lol I was laughing at the end with Gibbs :D
stareagle chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
I wish this could have been the way it went in the show - it would have been so hot. Great story and great sex!
alix33 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
"He smirked again and pulled a file out of his bag. He pushed it across the oak kitchen table at her, grinning all the while. Jenny put one hand on the top of it, noticing no case number or title. Opening it up, she found a letter from the President and a sheaf of forms. Application forms. "The current Director of the CIA met a sticky end recently. For a man whose speciality was getting inside terrorist groups, getting killed by his wife for having an affair was not the best moment of his career. So there's now an opening at Langley. President and the Senate have already approved it. That's if you're interested, of course." - EW! You think the CIA sent the sleaziest agent they had to go and deliver those application forms to Jenny on purpose? Or did Kort volunteer for this assignment?

"….wanted a new challenge. Jennifer Shepard will now take on the role of Director of the CIA, and she hopes to bring the same sense of inter agency cooperation and patriotism she brought to NCIS." Tony was frowning at the television. McGee was looking at it like it might bite him. Ziva was trying hard not to smile. Above them, in the new Director's office, they heard something break. Jethro just sat there and laughed, the bruises and bite marks from the previous day tingling. He knew Jenny wouldn't break down; she was too good for that. She was still playing the game. This time, though, they would tackle the other players together." - Yay!
MariskaBaby92 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Marvelous! Loved it from the beginning to the end. Your writing is amazing and i loved the dynamic of the story. The sex scene was off the chain!

Keep up the good work and write me like this.
DCIPHOENIX chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Woo that was good. Dont normally read Jibbs but this was nice. Not seen the series with her death. RIP Jen. :( an interesting read. :)xxx
dimplesgirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Wow.

Please continue this... I'd love to see their relationship with her as his 'enemy'!

Xx
MissJayne chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Loved it! Absolutely brilliant. *laughs like a lunatic at the end* Now why couldn't TPTB have given us *this* version?
Mrs. Elizabeth Gibbs chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I'm reading at smut at work-oops ;) I keep looking over my shoulder every five seconds to make sure no one is watching me. It's actually quite funny, lol. But this was SO worth it, oh my. I really, really love rough sex with them. It just works.

I was SO pissed when they said that Jenny was supposed to just have been fired. Um, a chance at real Jibbs, and the stupid writers had to be absoutle morons and kill her? Not a happy camper, to say the least.

I like that Jenny became the Director of the CIA. Except for the fact that the CIA kind of lies about everything, but, well, if it gets her with Gibbs I won't complain :)

Hot, sexy, and the edge of angst was perfect. I loved it :) More smut soon, please? ;)
Left my heart in Paris chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
interesting will Jenny and Gibbs's rlation ship get ruined her being CIA and him NCIS?
hopesmom chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
OMG! This was the best one yet! You are a freakin genious :)
HuddyJibbsAddict chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
AMAZING!

wow loved it!

totally unexpected but brilliant :-D