|Reviews for Beautiful Complications|
| Tifclark69 chapter 47 . 1/29
Ok, I want to read without stopping because this story and your writing are so well done. But I have to say YES, Edward was being unfair. I can imagine why Bella feels like he's punishing her for doing something he encouraged her to. He's probably right that it would be healthier to figure their shit out before trying a relationship, but it's still crappy. Can't wait til they get there!
| Ms Torres chapter 60 . 1/21
A bit shocked that Bella and Edward decided not to have any children. Their life seems fragmented to a degree and it has to be a sin not to want to continue good genes! Even if they only had one child or two children at least it would have been more fulfilling. Although there are those that make decisions like this every day somewhere in the world, right? Either way, it is sad to see this amazing story finally completed. You certainly deserved more publicity and reviews! Thank you for sharing.
| Guest chapter 57 . 1/20
Claire is a selfish bitch who manipulated Bella's curiosity to make John jealous and to get him to wise up. In the end Claire got what she always wanted which was validation from John for a relationship. Idiots. I dislike Claire and Bella's journey to explore their sexuality. Too many people were hurt in the process and neither of them deserve a happy ending.
| Tifclark69 chapter 4 . 1/20
So good, I can't stop reading.
| Tifclark69 chapter 2 . 1/20
I'm such a fan and it's funny that I'm just reading this one. It's so engaging and well-written! I live the way they paired up (or didn't) and how you moved Jasper from Bella to Alice without bitchiness, but in a mature and sisterly way. I'm looking forward to the read but expect I will cry with some heartbreak later... Love it!
| qazxswedcvfr chapter 60 . 11/20/2013
love love love this 3
| thewildone22 chapter 22 . 11/1/2013
Ugh, does Bella not know the rules of no strings attached? Edward too. Rule number one: no hanging around too much unless you're fucking. Too much speaking can Lead to feelings.. Idiots
| myself27 chapter 60 . 7/13/2013
I truly lovely story. Realistic and romantically HEA all in one. Well done I'm off to read more of your work now.
| magmom2 chapter 60 . 7/6/2013
This was a wonderful story. Usually when the story is so many chapters I lose some interest and want it to end but not this one. Keep up the writing.
| Rachel Rose Cullen chapter 60 . 7/5/2013
I told you i was going to read all your stories (; So far I've read Beyond the Breakroom, The Weddingphotographer and this one! I must say that BtBr is still my absolute favorite but the Weddingphotographer was very nice too. I did like this one, because it really shows how difficult and frustrating your own feelings can be. Especially with the whole bi thing which I've personally been struggling with ever since I was nine. I do feel like you've grown as a writer, especially in making things exciting and keeping your readers on the edge and wanting more. I think thats less in this story, but I still love your honest way of writing because the emotions and feelings are so recognizable for me, although I still feel I'll never be able to express my feelings in so many and beautiful words. But that doesn't mean others can't either do it's still very realistic. I can't wait for the new story your writing, something with a vampward right? Cantwait! XxxxRachel
| Angela LuvsFanfic chapter 60 . 5/24/2013
Hey Huni, Im sorry I didnt review before now, but I just couldnt stop reading :-) I completely loved the story, I loved dynamics between the couples, especially Edward and Bella...they chemistry between the two was palpable, so was the confusion of their burgeoning feelings. At times I wanted to scream at them esp when Claire came in to the picture, but most times I wanted join them coz they were so damn hot lol... I liked that you didnt make it easy for them, I get so fed up with the stories where everything is perfect and they automatically live hea...i like reality and thats what you did for me. Thank you for an amazing story, im already reading Beyond the Breakroom, but I off to read some more of your work. Take care xxx Ang
| ghostreader24 chapter 60 . 5/22/2013
Wow. I'm such a fan of your writing. I decided to read this one, too. And what a journey it was! While it isn't my favorite of your stories, it certainly evoked so many emotions for me, and I still feel unsettled. Please don't take that the wrong way. It is because of your wonderful writing of this story that I am in this current state. So, kudos to you as an author to evoke such emotions from your readers. I understand that not everyone's HEA might be the same. So, I can respect that. The happiness of your main characters, while important and clearly stated that they are happy, seems to lack a complete fulfillment. There still seems to be an undercurrent of regret here lurking in the distance. Despite all of the reassurances, neither one can really let go of the past, which is difficult and kind of sad. Life is never easy, and we all make mistakes. Mucho hugs to you for sharing this personal story.
| Robda chapter 14 . 5/14/2013
Wow,I love these two together, would love an edward with this kind of stamina around my house lol!
| Mrs.Cullen72400 chapter 7 . 4/28/2013
| Guest chapter 60 . 2/27/2013