Reviews for The Discipline of Fuinjutsu
The Kazekage of Suna chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
*eyes widen* finally someone who can write so perfectly :)
DeathCheater chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
Why you havent update it for so long time?
Irondragon555 chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
I have never seen such in depth description of fuiunjutsu before. I am shocked to the core with your vivid imagery and detailed descriptions on the subject matter. It is as if the scroll was on my desk in front of me. Well done. Keep up the good work and I hope to be able to use this as a reference for any future stories I may right about fuiunjutsu or tell people to use when writing their own
Blaze501 chapter 2 . 12/13/2011
This an awsome plot, and a great chapter.
Codenamed-Bolt chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
I know this a story about their teaching the discipline, but, as a suggestion, focus more on the actual method that he teaches it, and its functionality, versus merely reading it from the book. You're doing a good job, don't get me wrong, but giving it a more experiential look might enhance the readers' visualization (sp?). Just a thought, and update soon. I really enjoy this pairing, too.
Stormrune chapter 2 . 8/19/2011
I like this. You seem to have thought about this a lot. I am a sucker for fuuimjutsu, I remember a great discussion I had with another author in his forum, knuckz. Anyway, the only thing I have to critique is the lack of strengh in the story itself. Quite normal, since you're focused on sealing. I would have loved to see a Naruto starting this since the academy, and later travelling and fighting throught both time skip while developing the dicipline and it's versatil use, combining it with other disciplines like ninjutsu or taijutsu. That way you have a medium to express your ideas an a great story to be proud of. Anyway, hope to see more of this
ForeverFallen76 chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
I truly have to say, that is the most detailed theory of an aspect of any Manga I have read, where the creator refused to specify how a certain 'art' functioned. If I didn't know that this could be used in everyday life, I would be trying to do an idiot. My point, you just made something completely unknown and impossible, seem possible and like its always been that way. Like I could go to the public library and pick up their book myself!

Utterly amazing! I look forward to your next update. Until then. Later.
Jaster the jester chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
The idea of creating something concerning seals is a good idea. Everything seems to make sense.

Question: Are you going to mention things like:

- Number of symbols to needed to create a seal

- Mixture of ink; whether with the use of blood or chakra

- The use of material to write on

- The lifespan of the seal

- Different languages that are used with seals

- The functions of different seals

- Storage seal

- Storage of air, water, food.

- The displacement of objects (Swapping the air inside the seal with food)

- Explosive seal

- How the explosive is created

- Nitroglycerine

- Vibrating atoms to create heat

- Destruction of an atom/material (emc2)

- Timer/Alarm seal

Those are the things I can think at the top of my head. Also TheRealGoodyTwoShoes I believe that this is a story on account of the back storyline with Naruto and Kurotsuchi, as such there are violations with this story. :P
bakapervert chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Thanks for the update.
CGFlare chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
you amaze me with the way you have come up with the technicalaties of this ninja art. You have a gift and iu look forward to more of your writing.
x Kyuubi z chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Keep up the good work!
bakapervert chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Interesting story. Though I feel you make Naruto and Kurotsuchi too lovey-dovey. And it feels like they are too normal. Can't you give the two some quirk to make things more interesting.
Orchamus chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Rather odd, I'm unsure of the way you started, but I'll keep up for the hell of it.
Sabaku Ookami chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
The previous version was pretty good, but with the added story... it's even better and it's NarutoXKurotsuchi :D quite rare but also wonderful.

I'll be looking forward to any future chapters for this story as well as the other one.
Skamikaze chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I'm hoping that you'll expand more on this, because there are a whole lot of other seals that are possible... How about cosmetic seals? And maybe some 'Party' seals to go along? This is Naruto we're talking about, so his work isn't limited to the useful :P

It's good, btw.
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