|Reviews for Star Crossed Indeed|
| The Silent Speak chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
THIS IS SO FUNNY!
The setting is great, the situation is great, and I SWEAR TO GOD DOUG, YOU BETTER MAKE THAT SPECIAL IN THE STORY. THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!
However, if I must nitpick, the AVGN and Critic have had a rivalry in past years, (which is yet be resolved, if I might add) so I highly doubt they would talk to one anouther unless to insult and/or fight. (And yes, I do know they're friends in real life, but in the story no one used anyone's real name, so I guess the writer was using the Channel Awesome characters)
Live Long and Prosper,
The Silent Speak
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
1) is the whole story revolved around pizza?
2)LINDSAY & TODD WOULD NEVER DATE!
3)I don't think The Nerd is exactlly a member of Channel Awesome
| DannySamLover20 chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
wow! keep going!
| Michelle the Editor chapter 4 . 8/14/2011
Oh, if only this really could be the next anniversary movie! Though why not have both Phelous and Linkara appear as different regenerations? I'd call Snape more sardonic than snarky, but that's just the attitude behind the wisecrack.
Er, I think you meant that Nostalgia Chick is mooning over Todd in the Shadows, not Obscurus Lupa, but that's it for technical issues!
| Michelle the Editor chapter 3 . 8/9/2011
This is really well-written, but due to the fact that they're talking about their videos as videos and all, it feels uncomfortably like a real person fic.
| Michelle the Editor chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
This is very funny, and you've got them in-character! The clothing descriptions are a bit stiff, though-couldn't you work more of them in with actions, instead of listing them?
Though the situation has already turned into a Todd/Chick/Obscurus Lupa love triangle. I'm not sure what's real now. And with all the "FIRST!" people still hanging around, yes, the fan dumb and Mr. McNitpick are still a valid concern. I wonder if they'll create a character to represent the rabid shipping fangirl?