|Reviews for Wounded Soul|
| TacticianLyra chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
Interesting so far.
| liliDreamer89 chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
good so far. so cant wait for the next chapter. merry xmas to u.
| BugzAttack chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
| SimStars chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
I really like the idea behind this, and the way you've written it makes it seem less obvious than it could have been (plot wise and stuff).
The only critiques I have are an extra comma in this sentence "Ever since, that night in Risembool." and this chapter feels all over the place, due to how you're describing the fight in first person and then he's not there. It does make sense but it's a little hard to get to grips with.
I was trying to work out who had the daemon out of the homunculi, and I'm guessing it's Envy and that this is the first anime?
I really hope you continue this, I really love all the choices of daemons etc. well done! :D
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
| Kiseki no Tenshi chapter 2 . 11/9/2011
Wow! Great story! Can't wait to read more! _