Reviews for The Best of Intentions
KikoTsukinamura chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Only three words for Dave. Out of character. (I'm strict when it comes to him, deary.)
Homestucker413 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012

This was just magnificent! Bravo!
OwlheadAthena chapter 1 . 4/12/2012

okay i'm done. :P

Nice story! _
Kasper Kills chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I loved it! please write more on this i love dave/jade so much!
huskychao chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Oh, this is so cute! :3
CureFlora chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Love itttttttt. You really got their personalities well, and I love the way you wrote it, I can't describe it, but it was cool. I love the pairing, and you really did them justice.
CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I don't know Homestuck, but I do know that you are definitely improving.

I think that every good writer will eventually develop a talent of theirs, a certain part of writing that they are particularly adept at. For example, I believe that my talent lies with characterization and worldbuilding, to a lesser extent.

You need a little bit more practice, but I think your talent might be the ability to say a lot in just a few words.
BookWorm2011 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I loved it :) and I love the name Dave Strider
Jnnfr chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Wow. Really, you should definitely write more Homestuck stuff, I think you've captured Dave and Jade's personality awesomely,

"His logic consisted of calling bullshit every other second, so it was rather obvious she was just obfuscating stupidity."

Very Dave like. Good job :)