|Reviews for Stalking Zuko|
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 16 . 7/21/2012
Wow. This chapter was a succinct of Katara's anger toward Subject! The Southern Raiders is the last episode of A:TLA I have watched so I remember quite well what happened. As you said, I think Zuko fighting his sister was poinless. Maybe he saved some time and made Azula stay focused on him instead of the Gaang but I do think they could have escaped on Appa without him fighting Azula.
If I were Katara, I would be very very verrrry happy to have a Zuko on top of me huhuhu. Katara you lucky girl.
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 14 . 7/19/2012
"please don't hate me, please don't hate me" awww why on earth will Katara hate you for caring her to her bed? The Zuko from your fanfiction is so sweet that now I'm used to him being shy and akward and sweet. It does sound weird to me that Not Stalking Firelord Zuko is rated M (if my memories are good). I wonder how it will be? Gaaaa! I can't wait to finish reviewing Stalking Zuko and Not Stalking Zuko to starting the third fanfiction!
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 13 . 7/19/2012
Hello, me again after five days because I haven't Internet. Boo.
Jokes on Zuko and his honor will never not making me laugh!
So, this chapter was full of funny moments. I want to hug Zuko so bad for his cuteness with Katara! Aww a "big fat crush" I love this expression!
I'm very grateful to you for sharing your fanfiction for us!
| athenianflower chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Haha I love it! But I'm also curious as to what would happen if "Subject" ever found this journal... :D
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 10 . 7/14/2012
Even if I know that you watch The Big Bang Theory (since I have read Not Stalking Zuko fuhuhu) the cream chest rubbing (is this even English? *go hide herself*) has immediately reminded me of Penny and Sheldon. It was a really nice and touching moment between the two of them. I have always prefered Penny with Sheldon instead of Leonard, but I can't imagine Sheldon in a relationship with anyone because he's so er... Anormal. When Penny lets him sleep in her bed because he's stuck outside his home and she sings to him a lullaby, it was soooo sweet and I even have wish Penny to kiss him (not on the lips!) or watch him sleeping. But guaaargh! Sheldon has ruined it all! Or cockblocked himself.
... Er, let's stop talking of Penny and Sheldon and let's focuse on Zuko and Katara! Oh! And by the way, since the Zutara Week is in a few days (depends of the country you live) I was wondering if you have planned to do anything? Sorry if someone has already asked you!
As always, my deepest apologizes for my awful English!
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 9 . 7/14/2012
All the things you write in your fanfiction is headcanon for me. Yeah. Headcanon. You deal with so much plot that has in my head been skipped (not only the season three was fast, I remember the first season when Katara fights Pakku, she used badass waterbending but we haven't seen her training a lot. I accept the fact that they could have some ellipses but it is weird to me).
Oddly, reading your fanfiction has helped me to understand some points I haven't understand in the show. I always read your notes at the end of the chapter and they always make sense to me.
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
Can I say I loved this chapter? It deals as much with the Aang-Katara's relationship and Zuko-Katara's relationship which is obviously developping in a nice way. :3
I TO-TA-LLY agree with your point of view on the relationship between Katara and Aang (Zuko-Mai and Zuko-Aang too!). I haven't finish the whole season 3 but I do think like you. Aang's crush on Katara is obvious while Katara's feelings towards him are most friendly or motherly feelings. But it confuses me when I think about the Cave of the two Lovers (Katara has proposed to Aang to kiss to be able to go back outside or something like this -I have quite a bad memory- or their first kiss (Aang kisses her first by surprise and then she returns the kiss...). It's just weird.
| Addle chapter 8 . 7/12/2012
I just remembered: on the awkward talk they had on the balloon, I really loved Sokka's line "My first girlfriend turned into the moon" xD
I love the way you make Katara, as if she is the mother of the Gaang. Well, she kinda is...
| Addle chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
The fireflakes topic is an amusing touch in the story. I love it!
In an early review I said I was portuguese, so that expression "drive me bananas" almost threw me out of my chair with laughter xDDD
| Addle chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
I'm portuguese and in Portugal we say: "moche a (name of the person)". You're right, it's not nice being at the bottom...
| Addle chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
You have a unique way to write, a good way, that make us, readers, laugh... a lot! xD
| Addle chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
Loved the song by Lisa Mitchell!
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
It's official. Katara is a kuudere (I don't know if you watch anime or read manga so a kuudere is a character who acts cold but in the inside is very caring. Just maybe the always-angry side of Katara is not much kuudere but in my head she's a kuudere). Look, she even wrote a list (Subject's influence?) of what she hates about him to always have a reason to be mad at him!
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
I think I wouldn't review each of the chapters because it would be too many (crappy) reviews to read in your inbox.
I was a little bit disapointed when I saw Book 3 has 17 episodes (I'm not sure) and Zuko joins the Gaang at er, episode 10-11(?) I can't remember (and I'm a way too lazy to check on wikia) which means, there were only a few episodes of the Gaang WITH Zuko (I love the complete Gaang with Suki and Zuko! Along as with Aang, Katara, Sokka and Toph (and Appa and Momo) indeed). The complete Gaang should have more episodes in my opinion.
This chapter was very sweet with Subject (I do like this nickname) who went pick that flower for Katara just because that was on the list. Katara you are such a kinky girl!
And SEXUAL TENSION! SEXUAL TENSION I say! Just kiss her already! xD
| A.K.A. Tsukii chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Hello, I'm here again!
*sign* these famous fireflakes which drive Katara crazy... I don't know if I would try it if it really exist, come on, if it has the same taste of the sensation of licking the sun, boo, not for me.
Always angry Katara reminds me of season one Zuko, always angry and yelling at someone *laugh*. And her attemps of not letting him integrate the Gaang are like against her wil. With a such hottie and adorable Zuko, how can you possibly not hug him?
I truly like the fact that you have write what was missing in these episodes in the Southern Air Temple. When I was watching them, it seems a way too fast to me. I mean, it was: first Zuko arrives, following episode: life changing field trip with Zuko and Aang, following episodes: life changing field trip with Sokka and Zuko, following episode: life changing field trip with Katara and Zuko. Isn't that weird these three in a row life changing field trips with Zuko? Too fast for me.
The little moment when Katara get lost in her mind with what she think lack of fireflakes in the Firenation could stop the war was hilarious!
What I love in your fanfiction is the mix of the canon and headcanon/whatever you call it. When I first read it, I was at the end of the season two so all I have read was huge spoilers for me but I really don't care, your fanfiction was so breathtaking that I could not possibly stop reading it.
See ya c:
Sorry again for my awful English *go hide herself*