Reviews for Chances Wasted
germanfanfictioner chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
James is an ass in this. (sorry but it is true)
The story is great. It has potential. Like it.
forkingcarlos chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
I love where this is going! I want to know what else will happen! Update soon?
OldFanfictionThatIHateDearly chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
DUDE! I'm so pumped for the rest of this.

I'm not a Jagan shipper (CARGAN! WOOT!) but Clarry is definitely the bossest.

Um. This had better end up in Cargan, or I'm probably going to kill myself. I mean... I'm sure all those Jagan super shippers are saying quite the opposite, but seriously. Cargan is the greatest pairing in the entire planet with Jagan as a close second, and Jagan already had it's moment in the sun with this fic, so just to be fair, Cargan should really take it in the end.

Because Cargan is love.

For sure.

Anyway. Great job.
QueenKimo chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
LOL, Carlos is a fail. And I absolutely love the Supernatural reference in this, wonderful stuff my darling. You are great at the craft of writing. Anyway, James sounds like a total cock in this; what an asshole. Love you and this chapter.
Sxcsami chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
"Busty Asian Beauties?" You don't by any chance happen to watch Supernatural do you? Haha.

Great story, I'm really loving it and I'm dying to no what happens next!

My poor little Carlitos... James is being such a douche .

I really love you use of dialogue in this chapter and the way you incorporate everybody's emotions individually into this story :P Oh and I also love it how nobody seems OOC, like true James isn't usually really mean but if it came to someone stealing his man... Haha :)

I really can't wait to see where you go with this!

Great idea, plotline, and amazing talent in writing this! I love this so much...

Please update really soon! This is seriously terrific :)

Reviews are love

5/5 xxxxxxxxxxx.
Miss.MaslowHenderson chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
This is sooooo great! James is pretty rude but he is just in love with logan. I actually thought james wrote it but I quess not!

I cant wait for more please update soon.

How does carlos,know how logans ding a ling look like?
capsiclerogers chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
Omfg JAMESSSSSSSSS. D: Why are you being such a biiiitch! Don't do it Carlos, Logan won't hate you if he finds out! :(
irishoreo chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
And this just made me like Jagan a bit less andmade me go back to disliking Jarlos completely...seriously James, its not like he's effing DOING something about it...freakin bastard...
Scarlett chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
whaat D:

stupid james!



poor carlos :C

great job!

can not wait for more
squoctobird chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
Wow. Glad that my little review could inspire you to keep writing! And I don't know where this whole thing started but last night on twitter it was said that Clarry and I ran the Jagan gang. Not sure how I earned that title but thanks everyone...

I can totally see this situation blowing up in both James and Carlos faces. You should totally surprise everyone and be like BOOM KOGAN as the ending lol.

Anyways, my only complaint is the chapter was kinda short, but if you update often I can totally overlook it ;)
QueenKimo chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
...LMFAO im sorry but i kinda laughed when it said:

"Carlos. Born to...amuse." haha like hes some sort of roadside attraction or something. haha i loved this, and its great. Just the way you worded everything and layed out the sentences was wonderfull. Does the name Mitchel have one or two L's?


I always thought two but what do I know ahha
irishoreo chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Surprisingly I wouldn't mind seeing james get emotionally hurt...I do hope this ends as a cargan! Besides James can get anyone, but Logan and Carlos need 2 be together!
squoctobird chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
JAGAN is my OTP, but I do enjoy Cargan. Interested in seeing where you take this.
ILoveCarlosPenaJr chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Ew Jagan i don't like Jagan! Poor Carlos he's loves Logan but Logan is already taken but i hope Carlos can be with Logan then it would be CARGAN!

This is interesting can't wait to read more! :D
MyWonderLand209 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Sounds interesting

Please keep going
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