Reviews for Edward in the Afternoon
JayNahNah chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Dirty is good!
MaryKitty chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
How hot is this! So smutty I love it
Maplestyle chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Is it hot in here? Or is it just me?
Jessypt chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
This is just so much fun and holy hotness. unf!

Jess xoxo
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
bring it on bb...I love it :)...Happy birthday to your friend
carebear309 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Ah don't feel bad, Bella, you know we'd all do him ;)
LMBB chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
That Marvar is one lucky girl. Love this, love the frequent updates.
lynzylee chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
How many women have Fucked Edward line evah! MWAH!
VishousStef chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Very hot so far. Love the dirty/arrogant talk. Cockiness so very sexy on some people, like Hot Edward. Love smart mouth, take no shit Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.
reblit chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Cella Ella chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Hey, gmorning! And happy birthday to Marvar, she's a lucky girl, cause this brithday present you gave her is awesome! :D

I should be working now, but I decide to take a break and yay, here I am, totally fall in love with Edward. What a sexy motherfucker he is. Loved it! LOL

So, i'll go back work while you don't update the next chap. See you soon.

Well done as always, girl.


ps: my english sucks, so forgive any grammar mistake, k?

aerobee82 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
I always want your Edwards to fuck me. No lie. Even if they seem to be cocky as hell and somewhat off-putting.
Siobhan B. Masen- Fraser chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
There would be no need to lick my pussy with him talking to me that way, I would fucking come all over his face without a single touch. Damn it now I need more alone time...seriously gonna die today or else my poor hand is going to fall off from being overworked! No complaints out of me tho...carry on wit the smut:)

Till next time...

Bunch2009 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Cocky Edward and feisty Bella... loved it
aerobee82 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Hahahaha, she's so screwed. Or, they both will be. ;)
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