Reviews for Edward in the Afternoon
quietruby chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
I will be reviewing you the same way each time - YOU DIRTY, DIRTY GIRL! LMAO!

I love this! That makes me something...pervy? whorish? whatever this is great!
Just Me Alone chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Boy am I always so glad that Marvar has a birthday...Jamie for putting this on FB, Nic for tweeting it and me for having you on Alert.
angela12665 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Good God... *fans self*... Happy effin birthday to Marvar!
jarkin33 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011

you have killed me...

UNF _- "you don't need to tell me how to undress you..."


"Bella," he leans in and whispers in my ear, and I shiver as he pulls off my coffee-soaked camisole. "Would you like to know my name before I lick your pussy? Or would you like to know it after I fuck you? Hard."


I'm surprised I can type my name JFC

JayNahNah chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Dirty is good!
MaryKitty chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
How hot is this! So smutty I love it
Maplestyle chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Is it hot in here? Or is it just me?
Jessypt chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
This is just so much fun and holy hotness. unf!

Jess xoxo
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
bring it on bb...I love it :)...Happy birthday to your friend
carebear309 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Ah don't feel bad, Bella, you know we'd all do him ;)
LMBB chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
That Marvar is one lucky girl. Love this, love the frequent updates.
lynzylee chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
How many women have Fucked Edward line evah! MWAH!
VishousStef chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Very hot so far. Love the dirty/arrogant talk. Cockiness so very sexy on some people, like Hot Edward. Love smart mouth, take no shit Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.
reblit chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Cella Ella chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Hey, gmorning! And happy birthday to Marvar, she's a lucky girl, cause this brithday present you gave her is awesome! :D

I should be working now, but I decide to take a break and yay, here I am, totally fall in love with Edward. What a sexy motherfucker he is. Loved it! LOL

So, i'll go back work while you don't update the next chap. See you soon.

Well done as always, girl.


ps: my english sucks, so forgive any grammar mistake, k?

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