|Reviews for Edward in the Afternoon|
| quietruby chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
I will be reviewing you the same way each time - YOU DIRTY, DIRTY GIRL! LMAO!
I love this! That makes me something...pervy? whorish? whatever this is great!
| Just Me Alone chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Boy am I always so glad that Marvar has a birthday...Jamie for putting this on FB, Nic for tweeting it and me for having you on Alert.
| angela12665 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Good God... *fans self*... Happy effin birthday to Marvar!
| jarkin33 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
you have killed me...
UNF _- "you don't need to tell me how to undress you..."
"Bella," he leans in and whispers in my ear, and I shiver as he pulls off my coffee-soaked camisole. "Would you like to know my name before I lick your pussy? Or would you like to know it after I fuck you? Hard."
I'm surprised I can type my name JFC
| JayNahNah chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Dirty is good!
| MaryKitty chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
How hot is this! So smutty I love it
| Maplestyle chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Is it hot in here? Or is it just me?
| Jessypt chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
This is just so much fun and holy hotness. unf!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
bring it on bb...I love it :)...Happy birthday to your friend
| carebear309 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Ah don't feel bad, Bella, you know we'd all do him ;)
| LMBB chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
That Marvar is one lucky girl. Love this, love the frequent updates.
| lynzylee chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
How many women have Fucked Edward Cullen...best line evah! MWAH!
| VishousStef chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Very hot so far. Love the dirty/arrogant talk. Cockiness so very sexy on some people, like Hot Edward. Love smart mouth, take no shit Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| reblit chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
| Cella Ella chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
Hey, gmorning! And happy birthday to Marvar, she's a lucky girl, cause this brithday present you gave her is awesome! :D
I should be working now, but I decide to take a break and yay, here I am, totally fall in love with Edward. What a sexy motherfucker he is. Loved it! LOL
So, i'll go back work while you don't update the next chap. See you soon.
Well done as always, girl.
ps: my english sucks, so forgive any grammar mistake, k?