Reviews for Orphan to Help
Christopher chapter 24 . 3/25
I really liked this fanfiction. I think it was perfect and I hope you make more good ones.
Guest chapter 24 . 1/21
I think this was a great story and I think you should go into it a little more but that is just my opinion
greatlordofevery chapter 24 . 11/3/2013
make a story or movie about Leo and Luna. they make love and have sex. goes with the sex education. Leo is so desperate and does it to is "Twin Sex" I will watch/read it and it will be easy to find. please make it soon.
greatlordofevery chapter 24 . 11/3/2013
hey, can i make a story about Luna and Leo? like have them make love and have sex? you can also make an animated movie. i will definitely watch that over and over again. you stories are great but how about Leo and Luna make love and have sex? that would be so GREAT!
zumby101 chapter 24 . 5/1/2012
just finished, great story

but you didnt have to rush through chapters. Writers are at their best when they take their time and you shouldve taken your time

but i digress... great story please keep writting
SkyValor chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
i like this very much!
dreamer1821 chapter 24 . 10/24/2011
Wow just very good story it waswonderful to read 5\5 stars !keep writing!
Jusen-Allxy-11 chapter 24 . 10/23/2011
Cool! I'm sure you did a great job!
EspadAki7 chapter 24 . 10/23/2011
it was awesome! i love this story!
Guest chapter 24 . 10/22/2011
Flame-Metal-Heart chapter 24 . 10/22/2011
Wow i love the great happy ending with those guys:D Keep up you greatest work all the way okay.:D
jaden culley chapter 23 . 10/20/2011
love the story slightly unhappy that it ends next chapter seems alot to conclude in just 1 more chapter but have enjoyed this story
deamsey chapter 23 . 10/19/2011
I like your story ts so good make more
EspadAki7 chapter 23 . 10/18/2011
hahahaha XD! very good chapter!
Flame-Metal-Heart chapter 23 . 10/18/2011
Wow...that's a big old chp. *New to me sorry* Anyways, i like how the teachers tought the kids about Sex ed. telling them that it is important to wait then right away doing it.

I love how the ending turned out. I think it's funny and cute when Leo is enjoying things he shouldn't be anyways it's funny.

Keep up the work!
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