Reviews for That Summer
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
I remember reading this once years ago and immediately falling in love with it. I remembered it a few months ago and have been combing the site for it ever since, and can I say it's just as beautiful as I remember it. I almost cried well reading it, James pain and the scars they both had was just so real. It was absolutely stunning.
jennyellen chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
That was beautiful.
symphonies of you chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Ohmyfreakingsocks, Rach. Tis made me cry. Yes, it made me /cry/.

This was so wonderfully written. I loved how you captued every perfectly like a snapshot.

This was beautiful, Rach. This truly was.

You're such an aimyzhieing writer. Don't you /EVER/ forget that, 'kay? ;)

-Nic. :]
AshleyM15 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
really devasting. i think you caught James' emotions well in this scene. its a really great one shot:)
currents chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Grammar: 9/10

Flow: 10/10

Character(s): 7/10

Creativity: 8/10

Overall Story: 6/10

Total Score: 40/50

Rachel, such a good job!

/is trying to be un-biased ;)

The relationship between Louis and James was really well done, but it felt a little like a side-plot, and the main theme was that relationship, but I still like how you did it.


Your writing was flawless as usual, and the emotions were fantastic, and AAAH, it's my engagement fic, thanyousomuch, I LOVE YOU!

You're the best, bro.



jade2nightwing chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
That's sad :(. But really good
headcanon chapter 1 . 8/4/2011

I can't even say anything. That was amazing. I almost cried.

It was perfect, every part about it (though, I've always been a sucker for a flashback. ;)) Everything about it , I am in awe. :)

Thanks so much, darling, I love it.
WhyDidIWriteThis chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Awesome, i love it very poigant is that even spelt right :S. anyway it made me cry a wee bit :( but it was very nice and compact and wonderfully told. By the way Rachel is an awesome name for one of Maddi and Sundays children, i should know its my name too :) ~*