Reviews for The Traps
Hz chapter 3 . 11/10
Continue this one as well please
Sora chapter 3 . 7/15
Love it so far and I hope you update soon please.
Dark Scimitar chapter 3 . 3/2
This is a really well written version of this plot line! All the characters are perfectly in character and their reactions are believable for the different situations you put them in. Well done! I know this hasn't been updated in a long time but you should consider continuing it. It's really good.
Houndini chapter 3 . 5/19/2016
Hope you update soon!
OptimusPrimesWife1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Please, for the love of all that is good and pure in the universe please continue this story!
Arianna Nevaz Roo chapter 3 . 4/2/2016
Cool idea! More?
Gatoconbotas964 chapter 3 . 2/21/2016
This is a really interesting story! I have to admit that the first chapter is a little confusing since I don't know the entire story behind how Sam became a part of NEST in your storyverse. Is there another story in your archive that I need to refer to? Still, I like how you wrote the interactions between the characters and the way you described the various scenes. The narration flows pretty nicely, though I might have spotted at least one awkward word placement somewhere.
I wonder when Sam will realize that he's 'not in Kansas' anymore. I found it interesting that he didn't try to ask the Autobots why they didn't recognize his name and 'recognized' bots like Bee and Optimus while still realizing they were different from his friends. I am curious though that Sam didn't say something along the lines of Prime!Optimus not being the Optimus he knew. I guess he's still too wary to share that bit of information?
It took me a second reading to notice, but it seems that June didn't comment on Sam's injury when she saw him, only on his soaked clothing. Wouldn't she have tended to his wound or tried to clean up the blood on his face?
Anyway, thanks for sharing this story with us. _
IrunaLyoko chapter 3 . 2/10/2016
Vela513 chapter 3 . 1/23/2016
this is cool. Please continue!
starlight.moonlight.sunshine chapter 3 . 11/10/2015
asdfghjkl;jkhjghfgdfsergdfhj! finish it pleaase 0.0
Fallon18 chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
More More More, i love the twist up, please do a 4th chapter!
DoomCabbit chapter 3 . 9/24/2015
This story is so good, please continue it!
Zeta prime123456 chapter 3 . 8/27/2015
This is awesome! Update!
Deacog chapter 3 . 5/19/2015
Please update soon :D
Luke Moy chapter 3 . 5/17/2015
I loved this! You have a strong grasp of the Prime universe and characters, and I love the subtleties you've brought out in Optimus especially! The merging of the two worlds works quite well.
Will you ever finish it? I'd love to read more of this!
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