Reviews for Bonds
Munkeyfump20 chapter 13 . 11/4/2017
Thanks for the very good read
missingJane chapter 13 . 7/16/2016
Just found this story, and it was great! Excellent start in writing!
Aileil chapter 13 . 2/11/2016
Thank you very must. I can say without reservation that this is the finest most detailed Mentalist story I have read that included both Rigsby and Jane heavily, while still staying true to their characters. Furthermore, your plotting skills are admirable. While random chance was required to fall in their favour at times, you never asked the reader to accept the impossible. Thank you again. :)
coldweathergal chapter 13 . 9/28/2014
Okay, I didn't think I'd like this story (actually thought it was slash at first, sorry) but I ended up loving it. It just made me want to click on the next chapter each time.
There's just one thing I didn't get - what did Jane slip into Lisbon's pocket?
LouiseKurylo chapter 13 . 5/2/2014
This is a terrific story. Great action sequences, easy to picture what's happening. Enjoy the more unusual Jane-Rigsby pairing. Loved Jane's riffs on colors when he was high on meth. Definitely will read through your backlog of Mentalist stories. Thanks for writing it.
lovetowritetoo chapter 13 . 1/10/2014
Great story ! Enjoyed every word of it :)
Guest chapter 10 . 12/4/2012
La dee dah dee dah...
They're gonna live, we've been through the dramatic backstory, it's time for a tearful reunion-
*reads last line*
Guest chapter 6 . 12/4/2012
GAGH! Oh Jesus... *wipes laughter tears from eye* this is SO FREAKINC HILARIOUS! No! I shouldn't be laughing this hard... It isn't normal... *holds breath*...
*spits out air* BWAHAHAHAHA!
Loes-chan chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
Sorry last review was mine!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/12/2012
Wow wow wow wow wait a second.

Jane slipped something in Lisbon's pocket and then what?

You end the story?

That's so unfair!

I wannaaaa know!
holly chapter 13 . 2/14/2012
that is a really cool story especially without the kidnapping being janes falt please write another soon :)
MissDonniex chapter 13 . 2/12/2012
I really liked this story...great writing
Anna chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
Awesome! Can't wait for more!
Q Jenny chapter 12 . 2/10/2012
Oh that was really good! I was so excited for an update, any update, and then it turned out to be such a great chapter. First, I love the interaction between Rigsby and Jane- it felt so in character! And then the action scene- whew! Man, you are a really good action writer. I could actually see the moves happening in my head as I was reading it, and I was literally on the edge of my seat. I especially love the way you wove in the comments in Rigsby's head-the tips on fighting from his uncle? That was really well done, I felt, as well as the lines that talked about Rigsby and Troy's old friendship, the way it used to be. That made me realize what an impact this fight is having on poor Wayne, fighting his old friend like that. Whew. So all together, I felt you did a great job advancing this story both physically and emotionally. Really, really fantastic. And with the way the chapter ended, I'm still on the edge of my seat, longing for the next one!

Thanks so much for the update, I definitely can't wait for the next one! And keep up the good work! :)


ps- loved the idiom thing! lol, I didn't realize that phrase meant something else in other parts of the world. Good to know!
FlavishamXIII chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
I must say you are a very good writer, I believe you have talent! So far you have done an excellent job on Rigsby's character! and Jane's as well please by all means keep writing and updateing I look forward to your next update!


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