|Reviews for A Comforting Smile|
| Night Blooming Rose chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Been meaning to read this, but have been busy and ya know.
This was a good look into Zack. The dream was both funny and sad at the same time. Haha I could tell it was a dream when it got to a certain point. LOL
And you're right. I think Angeal thought of Zack as a brother. I liked how Aerith said that and comforted Zack. Angeal's death was probably the biggest thing to happen in Zack's life, and it had a huge effect on him. Because of Angeal, Zack started acting like him to an extent, especially when it came to Cloud.
Oh, I haven't played Crisis Core in a while, and according to my memory, you got it right. I'm not counting the dream ofcourse. LOL
This was really good.(_)
| PolyGriffin chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
First of all, I was about to say Reno was drastically out of character but perhaps because it was a dream it doesn't count? Well, I'll let you decide. Something else I'd say is that the dialogue is rather forced, try to ease up and get into the mind of the character.
| Blue Deity chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Hmm knowing what we know, Aerith's 'I'll love you forever' rings a little hollow
| Squall.Is.The.Best chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
A nice one-shot~ ]
As for the title, I think it's fine.
Anyways, keep up the good work!