|Reviews for Sisters|
| TyrionGreywind chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
This story is very relatable. My brother and I used to martial arts. I was born physically broken and he's always been a natural at everything physical. As soon as it started to get hard he quit, I stayed. Now I am a black belt who teaches classes for my school twice a week. He stays home and plays video games... I'm glad you wrote this story.l
| ILikePie95 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
I really like this. It seems totally realistic to their characters and I love a well written fic that shows Trina in a good light.
| OnlyMeMyselfAndI chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Wow. That was good. I love Trina, and the poor girl doesn't get nearly as much attention as she deserves.
| panda1222 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
one-shot. I like your use of the whole piccolo/french horn thing. In the show, I never really thought much of it, just that it was meant to be funny. But it fits in perfectly here. Same goes for the grand piano. Tori obvoiusly isn't musically(instrument wise) inclined, but I never thought whoo it belonged to.
I also love your Trina, she has the potiental to be so much more than Tori because she puts the time behind it. It even fits in well with the show. While I'm sad Trina gave up her music talent I'm glad that she put the time and effort into becoming a doctor. When I actually read about Tori's audition, I honestly thought she had been raped. When I read the end notes, I realized it wasn't true, although I still felt sorry for her.
And yeah, Tori does seem suspectible to peer pressure. Even in the pilot, she only sung when everyone pressured her to. While I'm not sure if I could see Robbie(Since Robbie technically controls Rex) saying something like that. I can see Tori reacting like that. Especially if all her friends are in the music biz and she has to stay home.
Are Trina and Tori still in contact? I know Tori could've figured Melody would have introduced herself, but you would think she'd at least give a heads up call. What if Trina never came home for Christmas and stayed with a friend/collugue?
I also think there's a wide range of what Trina could be( film, dance, instrumental) without even going into specifics. I always am annoyed their never shown Trina's talent(because she needs a way to get in the first place) But even if they did do it, I'm not sure if I Would like it or if they made Trina have no talent at all.
Anyway, since this review is getting kind of long and the sidebar is acting up, I'm just going to cut it here. Great one-shot.
| AnotherAspiringWriter chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Ooh! I loved this story! Do you think that maybe you could make a sequel to it? You don't have to though, it would just be really cool if you did. :]
| shiksa goddess chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I loved this fic. Trina's my favorite character, and she's ignored soooooooo much. We know she's smart...she's basically saved Tori's life or tried to bazillions of times. And she's not a bad actress. The one audition we see? It's good. Maybe her one-woman show wasn't great, but she performed it with grace, and she's obviously a good comedic writer. And I agree about the piano, who else's would it be?
Thank you, for writing a flawless, poignant story in which we remember how smart Trina is, how dumb Tori is, how underrated Trina is how overrated Tori is...
and reminding us that not every good story is about Beck/Jade's siblings or a romance.
| Clamanter chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
i agree with u 100%. if u ask me, i think that Trina is and can be one the the most talented on the show
| Arianna4President chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Trina is my favourite character, so I partuculary like this fic. Good job :D
| James888 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I like the story. You right Tori would do something
like that. Not because she is mean or anything but because
she was talked into dioing it. Also in the Esp in which
Jade was trying to take out Tori so she can get her part
Trina was the one who who knew the flowers was bad for Tori.
| DariusWOW chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Hmm, what is there to say. Clearly, you are attentive to detail, and I appreciate that you worked an angle that many are not open to (that is, there is something good to be found in Trina and that Tori does have shortcomings). This was written very well and I enjoyed it. Great work.
| Miss Alison chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I love it! I truely felt like that would happen, there was hardly any traces of OOC except a bit in Jade but I see what you did there. I love it! And I agree Trina isn't as talentless as everyone says (And when she auditioned for that one play with Robbie she was good!)