|Reviews for Without You|
| Gobalbucs chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I loved it- this was amazing! :D
The lemon was very hawt but very sweet!
| Writing On The Mirrior chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
It was amazing!
| VampiressBlack chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Wow for your first explicit slash that was very well done, the pace was great, nice build up and good emotions.
Do you have a beta? I ask because I was a few little mistakes like "froth" instead of "frot" and "teach" instead of "teeth" small little typos that a beta reader would pick up on, it just helps the flow of the story.
But overall very good!
| junkyjunk91237 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
that was... passionate, I suppose. but I liked sentimental Sirius at the end! :) update soon!
| loly chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Why a top!Remus? this sucks big time!