Reviews for Home Coming
FoxyFNAFFan12 chapter 10 . 9/23/2014
Wow! that was amazing though I do hope that you would write another chapter
Sugoi Matthew chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
Lol its like a gang fight over territory love
Sugoi Matthew chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
Sounds awesome really love it best fanfic ever!
Sugoi Matthew chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Chappie 1 amaazing! Lol yubabas nice for. A change!
rydersallow chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
mmmnn this story has potential but i strongly advise against using abbreviations in the story such as 'cuz' for because , it just doesn't help the fluidity of your writing , you need work but all in all it is a cute fic
Virginia Denizard chapter 9 . 2/21/2012
Contniue this STORY PLZ!
Linnadhiel chapter 9 . 11/15/2011
your story is so cute upload soooooooooooooooooooooooon ok
sakura2010zz chapter 9 . 11/14/2011
update sooooooon hehehehe
sakura2010zz chapter 3 . 11/14/2011
i think its so cuuut your a great wighter

ps sorry no good at spelling
Sesshy's Mate2012 chapter 8 . 9/8/2011
Too cute 3 update soon :)
Sesshy's Mate2012 chapter 6 . 9/8/2011
I hate edens guts. He's a meanie!
MissChefKyu chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
sooooo forward to the next chapter
Shannon the Original chapter 8 . 8/23/2011
this is so good but i had to read the whole story cos i didnt recognise it at first please update soon and in the next chapter can you start off by recalling what has happened before so me and everyoe else know what happened and why the events in the chapter are happening . please update soon!
Shannon the Original chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
This is good but you need to make it obvious who is talking i got confused with who was speaking, every new speaker should have a diffenrt line. :D please update soon!
Sesshy's Mate2012 chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
I fcking LOVeD it! Update soon pwease. ;)
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