|Reviews for Black Vengeance|
| Ratus chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
A wonderful start to the story. I look forward to seeing where it goes. I do so hope Severus and Remus got to know each other better on their moonlight date :)
| capctr chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Now THATS how PoA SHOULD have been done, bravo!
Now, how long until ch.2?
| buzzbumble chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Loved it! I am curious to what harry will be chucked in for ie:cedric dieing maybe? Hmm , alot of things you mentioned makes sense when you think about some things.. I wonder how ron & hermione will get on if harry isn't around as much?
| Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Thanks for this it was excellent I always wondered why Sirius was not angry and bitter about his fate the Ministry failed Sirius and nobody seemed to double check Crouch’s work or decisions even after his own son was a Death Eater and involved in a high profile crime and he got a trial and Dumbledore had the means and authority to give Sirius a trial or go see him yet never did and we know the man did not fear Azkaban and could get out of it if he wished thanks to Fawkes but he also had the cloak and Elder wand so could have gone to Sirius with nobody the wiser.
I always thought Albus needed Sirius out of the way to ensure Harry could be manipulated into being the sacrifice for the Greater Good according to Albus. I also wonder if anything was done to Mrs Black as she would not take the incarceration of her son lying down or not without the chance to cast him out of the family in public or welcome him back for killing the Potter’s.
Bellatrix would need to be formidable to survive as one of the few or only female Death Eaters many would seek to use or harm her for revenge or to gain access to her inheritance I am glad Sirius was not hurt by the guards given how petty magical people can be it would only be fear that protects him.
A good way to explain why Peter did and why Sirius laughed I always wondered if Remus played a part in Sirius being sent to jail the good little wolf no doubt got some gold for speaking out against Sirius and leaving Harry to his fate. Harry will be better off in another country I hope Harry has the sense to go with Sirius regardless of his friends or anything else and and it would be good if Sirius or Harry meet some Veela in France.
I liked the details on how Sirius escaped and the insight into being an Animagus I did wonder about injuries. A good detail as to why the Dementors might have attacked while Harry was flying.
Sirius as Black family Head will make life interesting, poor Neville he did not suffer like Harry but he too could have been doing with someone to help him or just be there to tell him about his parents as Neville’s Gran would focus on his father more than his mother I think. It’s a pity Harry did not meet Neville before Ron made an appearance or was sent by Albus to befriend him.
That had been funny baby Harry calling Sirius daddy maybe Harry will again.
Remus sent a letter and was friend of Peter very interesting I loved how Sirius got his revenge will the Ministry or Albus seek to kill Remus since Snape’s value as a teacher, potion master and spy is diminished at least he will be motivated to find a cure for himself and Remus but if Snape is dead that would be good too.
Very wise of Sirius to use Snape’s wand and I liked Harry’s words regarding the Dark Lord’s wand Harry could be doing with a spare wand I am pleased Harry will keep its existence secret and should Tom Riddle get a body he will cry at the thought of his wand gone and Olivander and his family have been around too long to be taken by a Dark Lord or without a fight or plan.
No surprise Ron would sulk than loose it when faced with attention from a girl. I really hope Ron and Hermione will be bashed or will suffer when Harry is away with Sirius as they are not good friends really more like fair weather and tend to be bad for Harry making him lazy or passive being pushed around by Hermione for things like spew and teaching others DADA.
It’s good Sirius was aware enough to guard Peter and wonder about the Durlsey’s who I hope will be pranked and end up poor, broke, dead or in jail.
Well spoken by Sirius to Hermione the girl really is a lost cause when it comes to teachers. Remus not taking his potion is odd he really is the Headmasters pet wolf we never did find out exactly what he knew, did or why he was never there for Harry except when teaching even helping Harry repel Dementors was done after a long wait when Harry was in great need, no doubt Remus went to check with Albus first.
A nice twist to cannon events and how Sirius stopped Albus from involving the Minister or allowing Snape’s potions to cause problems I do like Amelia Bones and Moody is always fun.
I am pleased things are looking up for Sirius and that Albus is going down I hope Harry can be saved from the old man’s manipulations and the Durlsey’s. I look forward to the next chapter thanks for this one and the large word count.
| PastaSentient chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Wow! Awesome story so far! I love it! Please update soon!
| george17 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
First of all. Love the chapter and really love the idea!
One negative comment though. Have you ever seen FBI ever written as Eff Bee Aye in an article or story? Wouldn't that look kind of dumb? Maybe it's some kind of weird joke on your part? Otherwise it looks how you might write someone sounding it out to a three year old.
Anyway, love the Sirius in this story. Does a great job of addressing the plot holes in how he acts in the original. When reading this, you very much feel like "Go Sirius!"
| Tommy14 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Wonderful idea. Having Sirius want revenge for their betrayals seems more likely with his personality than forgiveness. I can't imagine a more horrifying experience and most probable death for Snape that what Sirius gave him..and having Remus deal with the outcome...The revenge has started. Love the Darker Sirius who also is more cautious and hardened..Azkaban will do that.. I think that Harry would let his true darker thoughts/self be seen and accepted by Sirius both of them have been abused by Albus, Peter and Remus. It's great to have a story where Sirius will use his Black family knowledge and will be able to guide and protect Harry.
| Jiraiya's Disciple chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
This story is a phenomenal spin off of the Azkaban revenge fics. It has great grammar, amazing amount words. The only thing I'm unsure of, does this mean that Rise of Wizards is gonna be put on hold. Rise of Wizards is an amazing Dark Harry story and it would be a shame if its no longer a priority. Of will you be doing both fics at the same time. I hope you do, since you're an amazing author.
| Rainbow2007 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
i love it
| adis chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
A very interesting plot. I can't wait to see how their plans are. Thanks for sharing!
| Naginator chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Nice hope sirius gets harry away from his dumbledick worship, never understood why harry so blindly followed the professors when he should be wary of adults for ten yr not finding out the life he lived
| slashslut chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
go sirius! this was a awesome first chapter; cant wait to see what else you have in store for us!
| Darkskeleton chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
look good. I don't think I have ever seen a fic where Sirius don't forgive Lupin.
Hope you will update it soon with your other fic.