Reviews for Black Vengeance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I’ve always liked Remus ‘But’ I did think Sirius forgave him to quickly and I also felt that Dumbledore was a big hypocrite by helping out Snape and not Sirius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() now... This is quality writing. I have read perhaps 4 or 5 thousand, maybe a bit more hp fanfictions. Top 10 for sure. I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love this Sirius so much! And his relationship with Harry is amazing! Did not expect that ending to Voldemort, all the more brilliant though bc I was so surprised! _ |
![]() ![]() Definitely my favorite revenge plot. I love how you neutered Dumbledore, Snape and Lupin. Afterall they did not care a hoot about Harry. Love your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t even have words for how much I loved this. Wonderfully done. I couldn’t put it down! |
![]() ![]() ![]() According to your figures (50 points each) only 10 people were wearing the badges? I expected that at least half or even a quarter of the Slytherins would have worn them. Only 5 Slytherins, 4 Hufflepuffs, and 1 Ravenclaw? In canon, there were many more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, two very long chapters and this is nothing like I expected. Where is the vengeance? He should have accomplished SOMETHING by now? He's had some meetings, but overall he has been very laid back and not dealt with traitors (except Remus & Snape). Also, why was the fact that Remus knew about the change in secret keeper never brought up to anyone by Sirius? Why didn't Sirius confront Remus about it? I could ask many more "whys", but you get the idea. |
![]() ![]() bloody brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn this was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a phenomenally good story. I just had to continue reading to the end being enthralled with this version of Sirius. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply amazing! Great story and I love your version of Sirius. Have a great day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots of weird molest-y vibes coming from this chapter. "Playfully smacking his bum," the way you describe Sirius unzipping and pulling down Harry's pants and underwear before spanking him... I mean what the fuck man? Maybe it's just me but it made me deeply uncomfortable reading that, it all seemed not-so-vaguely sexual. I can't keep going with this story, I'm afraid to find a scene where Sirius just flat-out buttfucks this kid. |