Reviews for Black Moon
Guest chapter 27 . 8/21
Okay, so I read this fic a few years back, back when it wasn't completed and I returned to it because of Gakuen Alice feels and let me just say... I love the gothic vibe to it, I love how you work the dialogue into the narration so seamlessly, I love how you use "fancy talk" - big words like litany for example (I remember that one the most). Like the dialogue is so erudite, I'm writing something about the upper crust of society and this book gave me so much inspiration - I hope you don't mind me using your story as a textbook, though, I won't do anything you're not comfortable with. I love the relationships, not just romantic but how the characters all fall into one another. Mikan is so elegant and sophisticated and she's always the bigger person but Yuu needs to calm her down. Ruka was so flamboyant at the beginning but so precious. Natsume wasn't emotionless, he was subtle but intense and I really liked that. Even Anna and Hotaru were so interesting because they're Rasas so different from each other. Yuu stole the show for me cuz he was like the butler but not really and he was loyal but was not afraid to put everyone in line. I loved the equality of the relationships. Natsume treated Mikan like an equal and I appreciated that. He always made sure everyone made their own decisions and didn't force anyone to do anything they didn't believe in and that is really honorable. All this to say: I loved your story.
I was disappointed when I came back to this site to read my favorite fanfictions. The writing was kind of underwhelming and not that good, in my opinion, for most of them. I guess age came with higher standards. But yours didn't disappoint at all, quite the opposite.
I also have a request, if that's okay. You know the chapter when Mikan loses her memories and Natsume talks about how her lips can turn red with enough motivation? I really liked that expression. I was wondering if I could borrow it or maybe you could give me some tips on how to play the sexy, elegant, seductive dialogue you have going on? I just really really loved this story and it just got better with age, like wine. Are you working on something else for the fandom? Just out of curiosity. Also do you have accounts on other sites?
Okay, that's it. You are lovely and I love your story and tell me if I can use the lip expression but if not is totally cool, some tips would be awesome. Have a great day!
Sakuramy chapter 27 . 10/29/2017
I loved this you do a lot of gakuen alice which i like can u make a sequel about yuu and anna they are cute as well in this story like a short one just saying anyway im going to go find another one of you storys to read i cant choose but ill read one anyway
TheShiroNeko chapter 27 . 7/18/2017
So good, so good. I was in tears, this story is soooo well written.

Thank you so much for such an awesome read!

Love,
Shiro
tentenshi31 chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
Hi! i have read this story for already 3 times and I thonk this not the best one there is but there is something addictive about it and I just can't help but read it all the way. It is consistent especially the grammar, sappy at times and I kinda hate it that Mikan cries a lot but you would drop some beautiful lines here and there and I love you for it. I hope you keep writing more fics in the future! 3
Undertheskys chapter 18 . 9/27/2015
Why is Koko on his side!?
Undertheskys chapter 14 . 9/27/2015
WHAT THE FRICK! I THOUGHT HE AS IN "KENDIAR" WAS DEAD! OMG LOVING THE TWIST IN THE STORY
Undertheskys chapter 10 . 9/27/2015
I wonder if Sumire gunna show up, hopefully shes nice. But i also wonder when Luna is appear not that i like her or anything, she just makes it kinda interesting...
Undertheskys chapter 9 . 9/27/2015
UH where's Koko?
viha chapter 27 . 5/18/2015
Waaaah
loved it
Keep it up _
STRANG3STWRIT3RINandOUT01 chapter 9 . 1/28/2015
DON'T SAY IT SO CALMLY, YA IDIOT!
I was a bit confused in this chapter )*x*(
To the next chapter!
STRANG3STWRIT3RINandOUT01 chapter 8 . 1/28/2015
Did they have sex? I'm guessing so but...
WHY DO YOU KEEP LEAVING IT OUT DXXXX PUT AT LEAST _1_ SEX SCENE! DXXXXX I MEAN, I DON'T EVER EVEN KNOW IF THEY DO IT OR NOT, AND WHAT THEY DID, AND IT'S SO CONFUSING ,
April Twelving chapter 27 . 11/13/2014
I read this again today though I've read it so many times before. I took my time to take in each word literally all through the day. The story sucked me in ever than before; I haven't smiled or laughed or cried up a storm while reading this as I did today.

When I hit a unfathomable block in my life, I turn to reread some of your works that are my favorite and find myself calmed.

Thank you so much for being such a beautiful author.
sweet little chapter 27 . 10/14/2014
Oh my! Now I really do wanna be a vampire! I mean that I want that super powers!
Please Go ahead & Good Luck...!
Deadpool-girl chapter 27 . 6/23/2014
I loved the story very much, it was very sweet and good
joy chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
this is the best fan fiction i have ever read for the record.. although it seems too fast for the main characters to fall in love i found it very amusing.. :) i read this fan fiction almost everyday even at work.. im a huge fan of gakuen alice.. and im so happy to discover this one of a kind story.. thank you and keep up the good work..

though i miss the arrogant natsume i still love him here and i love how innocent yet smart in her own way mikan is, im glad she is not portrayed as an idiotic girl..

God bless :)
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