|Reviews for Peanuts|
| Taru Rui chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I don't know how I missed it - the title should've given it away, but I really had no idea what glitch you were referring to in your description until about 3/4ths in.
But it was deliberate vagueness, wasn't it? The kind of thing where you're supposed to understand late into the story? I can't recall what that's actually called, it's some weird hour in the morning and I'm here.
Even so, you have a nice, solid narrative, I think. It's a good voice, and no grammar mistakes I could spot. :D
I think the concept is absolutely fantastic, and definitely executed well. I love these kinds of things, where we pick apart the subject matter and ask a bunch of questions and try to explain things where the original work left a hole. I'd love to see more from you! (and I'll probably check out your other fic... after I go to bed haha)