|Reviews for The Foreign Fruit|
| Weirdnfreaky chapter 5 . 3/21
I liked this story... it was really scary... confusing though.
| LilttleFreak chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
I am so utterly confused... But it was well-written.
| Hevith de Zar chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
First of all, I ask an apology for not leave a review by chapter. But honestly I did not see very much needed. I'm not very akin to the adptaciones, or the like, because I always thought that originality comes first and foremost. However, the good adaptations are always welcome (in fact, I am about to do one), and reading fiction you think that was very well written. I found it interesting reading and everything. Only I felt Kisame did not have its well deserved place. His appearances were very brief and limited dialogue. Which, made me wonder what the hell painted in history. But ultimately, I realized that their participation was as important as that of all. However, I left wanting to read some more.
You have in your hands a good plot, great characters and all. I pray that you spend more time and effort, sure sdaldrá better. Good luck, Hevith.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
TwT I love this story so much! *has read it three times already* Please continue when you get the chance
| mistykasumi chapter 5 . 2/20/2012
Oh, this is a really interesting concept! I'm interested in seeing what you'll write next :)
| FMJ26 chapter 5 . 11/7/2011
Indeed that WAS a ending me and my kitten didn't thought to happen.
And WTF moment for the random transformation Suigetsu to Katyusha. But well everything is well,...
I'm wondering What's next adventure or mysterie will appear... Hummm
| FMJ26 chapter 4 . 11/7/2011
Oooh Mein Gott...
When I think this can get more and more mysterious and I can't wait to be solve and the nightmares of the people reveal.
Lol! Jiraya was the epic one. " I'm afraid of women". xD
And the dark secrets of the Braginsky family...
| FMJ26 chapter 3 . 11/7/2011
Oh my gosh!
Yay so that means you will continue the story, I mean we rlly need more gore things, just saying because I liked this type of stories... a LOT
Then *cracks laughing*
Yohoho Capn' Yao! xD
Ivan as a prince and Toris as a servant. I should have thought that.
Kurenai and her troubles... Ugh like she is the only one that have it and Jiraya being Jiraya.
And mysterious footsteps 0.o
| DeeaE chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
| Lunari Sakana chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
This chapter was cool too! Yeah that was a WTF moment but still good! You had me on the edge of my seat with this chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
| Lunari Sakana chapter 4 . 11/3/2011
way cool chapter! This would make an awesome show! I mean if they redid Mononoke with Naruto characters, I would watch it!
| Lunari Sakana chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
Now this one is really interesting! When you described Suigetsu I thought it was Haku from 'Spirited Away' ha don't I feel silly. This is a good start to a new chapter!
| DeeaE chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
I love this stufffffffffffffff
| Klavieres chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
This is pretty freaky. I'm honestly getting chill bumps. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/9/2011