Reviews for A Muted Truth is a Lie
Thatguy chapter 3 . 9/12
10/10
raisa864 chapter 1 . 8/12
I really love this story. I stayed up from 11 pm till 6 am to finish reading this.
I love Fern's attitude, with her teasing to her hilarious comebacks to her ideologies about the world (regarding the family, food, and her survival) to her interactions with the other characters, especially Killua.
The two really have chemistry and I could see Killua actually falling for a girl like Fern. Their romance is extremely cute, from the suggestive jokes, the emotional moments that leave Killua awkward, the small moments that Fern instigates as a joke that leaves Killua blushing like mad.
I also really liked how you captured the events of the series, being accurate, yet not verbatim in terms of details. You also put your own unique twists to it.
I love the action scenes. They really are intense, especially since we know this is not the true extent of Fern's abilities. I want to read about Fern using her mitts in actual combat.
Please continue writing!
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 28 . 8/9
Huh, I'll bet that was Killua's first sort-of kiss! Annddddd I'm done! If you ever update I might read what you update but given my bad habit of reading stories then forgetting about them it's 50-50 at best. Anyways, loved the story, it was a nice way to waste time! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 27 . 8/9
Heck I never even got Killua as a character but I suppose at this point they're... I don't even know really... I can't relate to either of them (at all) so their way of thinking is somewhat foreign... I guess their at the 'good friends starting to acknowledge each other's good traits' phase... anyways, good chapter! On to my last one! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 26 . 8/9
I'm still reading this fic... and even if the next two chapters are boring as heck my stubbornness to read the entirety of this story will prevail! So yeah... nothing to talk about... great chapter! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 25 . 8/9
What would I like to see... well considering I'm in the middle of the story atm I don't think I need to bother with this one.
Well, Alluka seems like less of an obsessive creep now. Bea is weird. And I think I support OC/Alluka more than Killua/OC at this point. Und... that's about it really... (aren't my reviewing skills #SoPro).
Well, on to the next chapterrrrrr! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 22 . 8/8
Aha! I'm not the only one who thought Mike was the 2nd cutest doggy in all of existence! Sadly my St. Bernard takes first, she's such a clumsy adorable darling... anyways! Cool chapter! On to the next! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 21 . 8/8
Oh, that makes sense. I would be more enthusiastic but the crazy ideas going through my head were a bit more exciting than a run away. Like time travel and reincarnation had a baby and said baby grew up with an obsession for Alluka... or that Akulla was like a split half of Alluka that fell off when Something invaded his mind... or like Akulla and Alluka shared the same conscious and just happened to be one person controlling two bodies... or... yeah... anyways, still exciting! Completely unexpected! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 18 . 8/8
Annnd for lack of review content, I think my reviews are (sadly) going to slowly start lacking... soz, I tried... so hard... it doesn't mean I don't like the story though! The story's great! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 17 . 8/8
I like Fern's careless use of Nen. I'd think mittens could be used to freeze things but eh, who ever thought a chain could be used for healing, Nen doesn't make any real sense... Well! On to the next chapterrrrrr! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 16 . 8/8
In my mind Akulla just went from nice reasonable slightly nerdy friend to obsessive, creepy, overprotective friend in all of one paragraph... impressive! I love the twist! I also like how Fern pulled on her mittens, curious what her Nen is. To chapter 17! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 15 . 8/8
I like the Kurta drama... it's nice :). Wonder how Kurapika will act if it's true... ugh, I'm lacking in conversation subjects... I cri ery tim... anyways, good chapter! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 14 . 8/8
Eh, is it bad idc about the whole Killua/Fern thing going on? Well, I want to see what happens with the wannabe killer smurf so bai-bai fer now! :D
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 13 . 8/8
What did I think of during Fern's breakdown... ah, well I felt bad for the poor girl, the fluff was nice... Ahh, I don't do emotional stuff all that well honestly... :/.
Anyways... nice chapter, not much to comment on really...
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 12 . 8/8
The one chapter I didn't really feel like reviewing for... although I think I skipped over one in the past. You better be happy with the friggin' 20 reviews I'm going to give by the time I finish this story... I'm going to the next chapter now, ta-ta! :)
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