|Reviews for The Letter From Dumbledore|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
| Mr Bellatrix Lestrange chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Well for a first fanfiction that was quite good. Both Sev and Lily seemed very in-character, especially their youth, innocence, and naivety. I liked the way Lily was torn, and how she felt a sort of respect for her sister's privacy, but then Severus being just as persuasive as he is... The end bit, with Severus being upset about his outburst was my favorite part, because it really was so uniquely Sev. Nice job.
| Mlle de Fer chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Interesting!:) A bit too pushy Snape, but otherwise very nice!:))
| HeirOfRavenclaw432 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I think it's pretty good. It seems like something that would have happened. WHY DID LILY HAVE TO DIE IN THE BOOKS? *cries* no idea what that has to do with this story, but whatever.
Anyway, good job. I like it!
| Anna-Cate chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That was really good :)
I don't know about anyone else but I always find it hard to write characters who are younger than 13-14, and I think you captured their childish curiosity well!
And I can't fault your grammar one bit!
I like how you write, and I think you should DEFINITELY write more fanfiction... you know, if you want to :D
I'd read it!
Love, Anna-Cate xxxx
| JessieLightyear chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I really liked how you showed Lily's dilema and didn't make her completely against Petunia. You did a great job with this :)
| duj chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
It works as a story, but you've made Snape very pushy and he isn't in canon. He takes his lead from Lily, not the other way around.
| Argentum.Alae chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
loved it :D