Reviews for Tired of Being Alone
Specky Clarke chapter 39 . 3/22/2014
You are fdollowing canon too closely and although the small differences, the best being the Harry/Hermione pairing instead of the dreadful JKR one, make the story readable, it is not different enough to continue reading.
GOLDENCOOKIESLAP chapter 39 . 10/20/2013
I seriously hope you will continue this it is soo awesome Harry and Hermione all the way 3
HermiHugs chapter 3 . 9/14/2013
Quite a good story so far but I see that many times 'definitely' was being replaced by 'defiantly'. Small things but they take your mind away from the story. Thanks for an entertaining story so far.
Scribe of Nyx chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
This is a good chapter! Great writing. Wish my story had some reviews.
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 39 . 6/23/2013
Cant wait to see where this goes
Ero-Neko-Hime chapter 39 . 6/14/2013
Please update soon
Mr Norrell chapter 8 . 5/6/2013
So Lupin suddenly shows up out of nowhere, and yet he's been there the whole time? Since you're not even mentioning the Lupin-Tonks storyline, and you made Ron be the voice of reason about Snape trying to get information from Malfoy, there's really no reason for Lupin to be there in the first place. The "And he's not alone I see" line can easily be given to someone else.

The adults wouldn't have been involved on the attack on Percy, only the kids who had direct knowledge of how horrible Umbrage was would've been incensed enough to hex him for what he said.
Mr Norrell chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
Harry slept with Cho? Oh, please. I know you said you were taking liberties with that relationship but who has sex with a crying girl? Unless you're a rapist it's an instant turn off. There's no way that Harry would've slept with someone he didn't absolutely love and intend on marrying. It's as ridiculous as saying that Hermione fucked Krum.
Mr Norrell chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
And why is Luna, a Ravenclaw, in the Gryffindor common room? While it may happen from time to time in fanfiction they've never allowed out-of-House guests in the common rooms before (The only exceptions being Draco unknowingly bringing in Harry and Ron into Slytherin's, while they were masquerading as Crabbe and Goyle in CoS, and Luna taking Harry into Ravenclaw's during DH but both were implied to be highly unusual events).

A referent table, that would be a table that refers you to other things, right?
Mr Norrell chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
Not bad.
smkennedy007 chapter 17 . 4/5/2013
Thank you,thank you,thank you! for not killing the poor owl! Hedwig didn't deserve to die! So thank you! :)
Ronin Kenshin chapter 39 . 3/24/2013
great fic can't wait to see what the future holds good work
gabbysmom chapter 39 . 3/21/2013
can't wait for the rest of the story
teaddicted chapter 39 . 3/20/2013
Wasn't too impressed with this chapter when compared to other chapters you have written. Smut is fine, if it has a point to it. In this case it does, but since the chapter ended up consisting of about 10% story and 90% smut, it felt kinda cheap.

Looking forward to seeing how their attempt to breach into the ministry goes though!
flame55 chapter 39 . 3/19/2013
This is great
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