|Reviews for The Wandering Coyote|
| Black Dragon Master chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
That was good sums up the Man with no Name perfectly
| WVrambler chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Very well written! This was a very good insight into the character of The Man With No Name and I enjoyed it very much!
| MissMilkMaid chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Very nice, though it seems more like an essay, or a portrait than, a story. You do a lot of telling, especially at the beginning.
Still I'm not complaining. I love this character. He's probably my favorite fictional character ever.
If you have the time and the desire, you might consider rewording his dialogue a little. I just watched a Fist Full of Dollars and he doesn't really use full sentences too often. Also, he has a bit of a draw to his speech, dropping the "ing" and say'n "ya" or "yer" instead'a "you" and "you're."
"Why are you yelling at this woman?" might be more in character if it was "Why ya yell'n at this woman?"
Thanks for posting this.
| sobjack chapter 1 . 1/17/2012