Reviews for One Night at McCarty's
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29/2016
PLEASE TELL ME THAT BELLA SLEEPS WITH JAKE THAT IS JUST YUCK Jake is just trying to get into Bella's pants I can tell by they way he acts
edwards-sparrow chapter 25 . 11/19/2013
hun you haven't updated in over a year I hope you do so soon xoxo
crazycats7 chapter 25 . 11/9/2013
This is a good story, I hope that you will continue it. I would like to see them get closer to the point where they get married and have a family. But, for a little drama maybe Tanya comes back to start trouble, like wanting both Edward and Hannah back
crazycats7 chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
alright, about time.
crazycats7 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
keep them healing a leading to each other. they belong together raising Hannah and maybe children of their own.
crazycats7 chapter 12 . 11/8/2013
Please don't do the love triangle thing.
crazycats7 chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
Please don't let Bella go out with Jake. It doesn't work. It has to be Edward
crazycats7 chapter 6 . 11/8/2013
I hope that they become boyfriend and girlfriend
crazycats7 chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
omg, she dated Mike?
crazycats7 chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
it's cute so far. though I do hate Tanya
crazycats7 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
so far so good.
Lizzard43 chapter 25 . 9/1/2012
I'm glad Bella is starting to think about her wants and needs. That is a huge step for her. Now lets see if it carries over in the Edward is going to get his eyes opened if and when this happens. I'm imagining floodgates opening, a can of coke that has been shaken...yeah, I think you get the picture. Lol

I can't wait to see what happens...
GreenEyedLove06 chapter 25 . 8/28/2012
Can't wait for more
abigail-92934130 chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
Awww, i liked the story from beginning to the end.
ssbksmm chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
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