Reviews for One Night at McCarty's
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29
PLEASE TELL ME THAT BELLA SLEEPS WITH JAKE THAT IS JUST YUCK Jake is just trying to get into Bella's pants I can tell by they way he acts
edwards-sparrow chapter 25 . 11/19/2013
hun you haven't updated in over a year I hope you do so soon xoxo
crazycats7 chapter 25 . 11/9/2013
This is a good story, I hope that you will continue it. I would like to see them get closer to the point where they get married and have a family. But, for a little drama maybe Tanya comes back to start trouble, like wanting both Edward and Hannah back
crazycats7 chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
alright, about time.
crazycats7 chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
keep them healing a leading to each other. they belong together raising Hannah and maybe children of their own.
crazycats7 chapter 12 . 11/8/2013
Please don't do the love triangle thing.
crazycats7 chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
Please don't let Bella go out with Jake. It doesn't work. It has to be Edward
crazycats7 chapter 6 . 11/8/2013
I hope that they become boyfriend and girlfriend
crazycats7 chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
omg, she dated Mike?
crazycats7 chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
it's cute so far. though I do hate Tanya
crazycats7 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
so far so good.
Lizzard43 chapter 25 . 9/1/2012
I'm glad Bella is starting to think about her wants and needs. That is a huge step for her. Now lets see if it carries over in the bedroom...lol. Edward is going to get his eyes opened if and when this happens. I'm imagining floodgates opening, overflowing...like a can of coke that has been shaken...yeah, I think you get the picture. Lol

I can't wait to see what happens...
GreenEyedLove06 chapter 25 . 8/28/2012
Can't wait for more
abigail-92934130 chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
Awww, i liked the story from beginning to the end.
ssbksmm chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
:)
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