Reviews for Kid
little-miss-perfect-Gryffindor chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
It's a little rough around the edges.I like the story,but if you used spell check it could really shine. :)
yugiyamisex4eva chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
oh man this is funny
MarineLvr84 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Hey, I'm not a grammar natzi or anything because I was too busy reading this amazing story. You rarely see Derek bottom and you did it perfect! I don't sit there and critize on ppl writing because if the story is understable (like yours were) I'm not gonna go " Oh I saw a mistake right there!" "Thats so wrong!"

Who the hell cares when there is Morgan/Reid having uber sex LOL

Story was uber, thank you.
Amanda chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
It was really great! You used too much detail in some places and too little in others. I would suggest you fix that a little bit. Also, your grammar and spelling was a bit off too. But, overly all it was really good. One of the best I've read.